zancrow the flame god Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 [IMG]http://i1073.photobucket.com/albums/w392/sukazuX/SukazutheXyzHunte.jpg[/IMG] This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can select and equip 1 face-up Xyz monster your opponent controls to this card. (Any Xyz Material(s) attached to the target are sent to the Graveyard.) This card gains ATK equal to half the equipped monster's ATK. Once per turn, you can send 1 Xyz monster equipped to this card to the Graveyard to negate the activation and effects of a Spell or Trap card, and destroy it. (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 It mains effect makes for a Solemn Judgment like effect which is certainly nice. It certainly can make an odd fun little tech for your Side or possibly even as a Main. Quick question though: what happens to the materials of said XYZ monster(s)? And I also suggest lowering its ATK to say 2000 if it can constantly grab XYZ's for free stats. Otherwise, I'd say it makes for an interesting card. Not sure how usable is it since you'll need to Tribut Summon it or find some sort of way to get it out eily, but still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted April 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 [quote name='Anbu-of-Sand' timestamp='1335035923' post='5921122'] It mains effect makes for a Solemn Judgment like effect which is certainly nice. It certainly can make an odd fun little tech for your Side or possibly even as a Main. Quick question though: what happens to the materials of said XYZ monster(s)? And I also suggest lowering its ATK to say 2000 if it can constantly grab XYZ's for free stats. Otherwise, I'd say it makes for an interesting card. Not sure how usable is it since you'll need to Tribut Summon it or find some sort of way to get it out eily, but still. [/quote] the materials go to the grave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 I suggest you make this card unavailable for special summon, and I agree to Anbu-of-Sand you should lower it's stats it's kinda OPed. Also, you might want to give a limit to the number of XYZ monsters that this card can equip to herself. BTW, very nice artwork, she's so cute >xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoseSymphony Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 Here's the changes that I would make: [quote] 1400/2000/Lv.6 This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can select and equip 1 face-up Xyz monster your opponent controls to this card. (Any Xyz Material(s) attached to the target are sent to the Graveyard.) This card gains ATK equal to half the equipped monster's ATK. Once per turn, you can send 1 Xyz monster equipped to this card to the Graveyard to negate the activation and effects of a Spell or Trap card, and destroy it. (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card.) [/quote] Reasoning? Well, for one thing, the card is WAY too OP'ed. The ATK is way too high, first off. For example, if she captured a Utopia/Leviathan Dragon, pretty much the two most common Xyz monsters in the game, she'd be a 4900 beatstick that can negate an effect. And that's only if you manage one. The changes I made to the ATK/DEF were so that you could easily play with her either offensively or defensively, and still give the opponent some sort of chance. If you don't have the latter, it's not really a "Realistic Card". As for the effect, it just supports what I said before. The ATK boost isn't as big, but it's big enough to have her be considered some sort of a threat when she grabs an Xyz monster. I also ditched the effect monster bit because I don't think a reusable Solemn is very balanced either. .-. If anything, though, I think the pic is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 [quote name='RoseSymphony' timestamp='1335041783' post='5921238'] If anything, though, I think the pic is great. [/quote] Check ) I very much agree to you XD Anyway, rose, you should have just suggested, and leave the whole revising/remaking of effects to him, because it is still his card and i believe he can even do something better than that, right? . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoseSymphony Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 [quote name='Zei_Ederis_17' timestamp='1335042529' post='5921252'] Check ) I very much agree to you XD Anyway, rose, you should have just suggested, and leave the whole revising/remaking of effects to him, because it is still his card and i believe he can even do something better than that, right? . [/quote] I was simply compacting all of my changes into a single, understandable form of an effect. He doesn't have to make the changes if he doesn't want to; they were just my suggestions and I put them in OCG form for readability and simplicity if he wanted to adopt them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 why didn't you use suzaku from code geass lelouch of the rebellion for the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted April 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 [quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1335044000' post='5921318'] why didn't you use suzaku from code geass lelouch of the rebellion for the pic [/quote] because her name is not a misspelling of the name suzaku, sukazu is an actual japanese girl name. also, the monster is supposed to be female. derp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 21, 2012 Report Share Posted April 21, 2012 Guys, get serious. In this format, yes, there are a lot of Xyz, but it's pretty damn hard to get this out in front of one unless you're using Frognarchs. And Frognarchs need consistency. They can't afford to run something like this. If you're making something Level 5 or higher, and not giving it an eff that Special Summons itself, [b]give it a consistently efficient effect[/b]. Examples of this in RL Yugioh are Caius, Raiza, Vanity's Fiend, etc. Hell, even amazing s*** like Verz Coppelial isn't ran by many because of the above three taking up space. This has an amazing eff if used at the best timing, yes, and if you get it out you could say it's gg. But it lacks consistency. I say lower its ATK to 2300 and give it an eff that works even if there are no Xyz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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