Cerberus! My first (presented) card!

[Josh667886]

Cerberus! I attached him and the materials! Tell if I should move to a different forum! Feel free to criticize!

 

Actually, i's a little unrealistic. And yes, yes I did just reply to myself! Email me at [email protected]!

[RBY]

You shouldn't post cards as attachment. Copy them onto your desktop, then go to tinypic.com and upload them there and copy the code they give (it will say that its for forum posts). and paste it onto your post.

 

As for the cards themselves, they are more than a little unrealistic. You should probably move them to another forum (the "Any Other Cards" section would be best).

 

If you want to keep them here and make them realistic, here is my critique:

 

Dark Imp seems useless on its own, so I like the fact that it is necessary for Cerberus, but Cerberus is too powerful, even when considering how weak Dark Imp is. 9050 attack is too high, maybe 5000 would be better. It also has the ability to freely destroy your opponent's cards, so that needs to have some sort of cost (if its a voluntary effect) or there should be a negative consequence for there being no cards to destroy (if it is required). Its graveyard effect is also cheap, because banishing it will be a small price when compared to how many cards you could potentially draw. There should be some additional cost to this as well (maybe you have to discard a certain number of the cards you draw or you lose if there are no dark beast monsters left and you end up drawing out your entire deck.

[Josh667886]

You shouldn't post cards as attachment. Copy them onto your desktop, then go to tinypic.com and upload them there and copy the code they give (it will say that its for forum posts). and paste it onto your post.

 

As for the cards themselves, they are more than a little unrealistic. You should probably move them to another forum (the "Any Other Cards" section would be best).

 

If you want to keep them here and make them realistic, here is my critique:

 

Dark Imp seems useless on its own, so I like the fact that it is necessary for Cerberus, but Cerberus is too powerful, even when considering how weak Dark Imp is. 9050 attack is too high, maybe 5000 would be better. It also has the ability to freely destroy your opponent's cards, so that needs to have some sort of cost (if its a voluntary effect) or there should be a negative consequence for there being no cards to destroy (if it is required). Its graveyard effect is also cheap, because banishing it will be a small price when compared to how many cards you could potentially draw. There should be some additional cost to this as well (maybe you have to discard a certain number of the cards you draw or you lose if there are no dark beast monsters left and you end up drawing out your entire deck.

Yeah, thanks for the advice. I didn't really consider the card until I posted it, then I saw all sorts of problems. I'll try 6000 ATK, but make the destruction effect "Banish one level 6 or higher DARK monster in your graveyard to destroy three cards the opponenent controls."

 

Yeah, thanks for the advice. I didn't really consider the card until I posted it, then I saw all sorts of problems. I'll try 6000 ATK, but make the destruction effect "Banish one level 6 or higher DARK monster in your graveyard to destroy three cards the opponenent controls."

I'll also change the banish effect to one DARK monster, and add "Then discard until that monster is the only card in your hand."

[Tekashi Mutzomuto]