Battle Counters (Starting Over)

[Zazubat]

Hello all, I'm starting over, and I have started to make whole new cards, that focus on OCG, good forum set-up (Spoiler, Lore etc) and good looking pictures and card effects that are usefull with each other, so I hope that this is okay, if you find any faults, tell me, but please try to be nice. I worked very hard, and used a lot of time on this post, so enjoy thank you!

[spoiler=Monster Cards]
[spoiler=Normal, Effect, Tuner]
[Spoiler=Dummy Bug][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55665-Dummy_Bug][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55665.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Equip this to 1 face-up monster on your side of the field. Each turn doing your Battle Phase, put 1 Battle Counter on that card.
(A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Anti Unit][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55667-Anti_Unit"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55667.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]Once this card is Normal Summoned, place 1 Battle Counter on this card. Doing your Main Phase you can put 1 Battle Counter on this card. If you do so, this card cannot attack this turn. Once this card attacks, you can remove 1 Battle Counter to inflict piercing damage to your opponent.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Keei, Balance Master of Light and Dark][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55668-Keei__Balance_Master_of_Light_and_Dark][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55668.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]If this card was Special Summoned, you cannot change this card's Battle Position, besides with a Card Effect. Add 1 Battle Counter to this card when summoned. As long as this card remains face-up, each time a face-up monster on your side of the field earns a Battle Counter, put 1 more on it. This card can only attack by removing 1 Battle Counter from this card.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Battle Tracker][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55670-Battle_Tracker"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55670.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]Doing you Standby Phase, place 1 Battle Counter on this card. Place 1 Battle Counter on each monster summoned to your side of the field. Once per turn, if this card attacked, you can remove 1 or more Battle Counter from this card at the end of the Battle Phase to draw cards equal to the number of Battle Counters Removed.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Monster Tamer Dukei Lamaharah][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55671-Monster_Tamer_Dukei_Lamaharah"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55671.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 4 Battle Counters from any monster on your side of the field. Once per turn doring your Standby Phase, add 1 Battle Counter to this card. Doing your Main Phase, you can tribute 1 monster with at least 1 Battle Counter, to add Battle Counters equal to the total level of the tributed monster to this card. When this card battles, you can remove 6 Battle Counters to destroy all monsters on your opponents side of the field, then Bannish this card. This card can only attack as long as it has at least 1 Battle Counter on it.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Almost Flying Henrich][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55675-Almost_Flying_Henrich"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55675.jpg[/img][/url]
[i]Jumping out of the ocean, this "little" guy tries to fly, but remains in the water.[/i][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Underworld Whale][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55677-Underworld_Whale"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55677.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Normal Monster from you Graveyard with the same DEF as this card. If done so, place 1 Battle Counter on this card. Doing your Battle Phase, you can remove 1 Battle Counter from this card to switch it's battle position. Once done so, increase it's original ATK and DEF by 300[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Sneak Attacker Hanna][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55888-Sneak_Attacker_Hanna"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55888.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]This card can only gain Battle Counters by it's own effect. Once per turn doing your Standby Phase, put 1 Battle Counter on this card. Doing your Battle Phase, you can remove 1 Battle Counter to attack directly.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Swamp Warrior Lady][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55897-Swamp_Warrior_Lady"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55897.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]This card cannot attack besides by it's own effect. Once per turn doing your Standby Phase, put 1 Battle Counter on this card. Doing your Battle Phase, remove 1 Battle Counter for this card to attack.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Double Danger Warrior][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55900-Double_Danger_Warrior"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55900.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]Doing your Battle Phase, you can remove 2 counters for anywhere on the field to make this card's ATK 2500 doing the Battle Phase only.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Battle Robot V1][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55902-Battle_Robot_V1"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55902.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]When this card destroys a monster, add 1 Battle Counter to 1 face-up monster on your side of the field, besides this card.
Doing battle, remove 1 Battle Counter from this card to increase ATK by 500.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Mental Dragon][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55904-Mental_Dragon][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55904.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]This card can only be Special Summoned by it's own effect. Remove 5 Battle Counters from your side of the field to Special Summon this from your hand. This card can only attack when there is at least 1 monster with 1 Battle Counter. This card cannot earn Battle Counters.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Tatti Fairy][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55907-Tatti_Fairy][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55907.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]This card cannot attack, and cannot change Battle Position, besides by Card Effects, and cannot earn Battle Counters. You can tribute this card and remove 3 Battle Counters from your side of the field to add 1 "Ultimate Battle of Ultimate Destruction" to your hand from Deck. Once done so, remove this card from play.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Underwater Demon][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55910-Underwater_Demon][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55910.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]This card cannot be used as a Tribute, besides by banishing this card. This card cannot earn Battle Counters. Once per turn doing your Battle Phase, increase this card's ATK by 100 for each Battle Counter in play.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Dead Drop Light Fish][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55915-Dead_Drop_Light_Fish][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55915.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]You can substitute this card for any 1 Fusion-Material Fish or Zombie monster. When you do this, the other Fusion-Material Monster(s) must be the correct one(s).[/b][/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Fusion, Ritual, Synchro, Xyz]
[Spoiler=Ugly Fat Troll Orc Mashmahal][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55673-Ugly_Fat_Orc_Mashmahal"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55673.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]2 level 4 monsters.
Doing you Battle Phase, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, to add 5 Battle Counters to any face-up monster on your side of the field.
If this card has a total of 10 Battle Counters, you can remove all Battle Counters from this card doing your Battle Phase, and destroy all Spell and Trap Cards. Once this card is destroyed by battle, if it still has 1 Xyz Meterial on it, Special Summon that card, and add 4 Battle Counters to it.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Flying Monster Whale][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55681-Flying_Monster_Whale"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55681.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]1 "Almost Flying Whale" + 1 "Underworld Whale".
This card can be Fusion Summoned by Tributing both Fusion Meterial Monster listed above, and removing them from play (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once done so, put 2 Battle Counters on this card. Once per turn doing you Battle Phase, you can remove 2 Battle Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Almost Flying Whale" to your opponents of the field from your deck in face-up Attack.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Mystical Battle Beast][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55960-Mystical_Battle_Beast][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55960.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]This card can only be Ritual Summoned by the effect of "Battle Spell".
Once Ritual Summoned, if there are any Battle Counters on the field, gain 1500 Life Points.
Once per turn doing your Standby Phase, put 1 Battle Counter on this card. Doing your Battle Phase, if this card destroys monster, you can remvoe 3 Battle Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 monster with equal ATK to the destroyed monster from your graveyard.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Really Angry Beast][url="http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55899-Really_Angry_Beast"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/55899.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.
This card cannot earn Battle Counters, besides by it's own effect.
Doing your Standby Phase, put 1 Battle Counter on this card. Once per turn doing your Battle Phase, you can remove 5 Battle Counters from your side of the field to make this card attack twice. This card can only attack when it has at least 1 Battle Counter on it.[/b][/spoiler][/spoiler]
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[spoiler=Spell Cards]
[spoiler=Spirit Book][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55666-Spirit_Book][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55666.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Equip to one face-up monster on your side of the field. When that card is destroyed and send to your graveyard, put Battle Counters on 1 face-up monster on your side of the field, equal to the level of the destroyed monter. You can return this card to the top of your deck by paying 1000 Life Points[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Medical Resurrection][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55889-Medical_Resurrection_][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55889.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field, and gain 500 Life Points queal to level of the tributed monster.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Undeniable Truth][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55890-Undeniable_Truth][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55890.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Set Spell and Trap cards must be shown on each side of the field before being set. When this card is destroyed, you can pay 500 Life Points to add this card to the top of your deck.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Dreaded Sword][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55895-Dreaded_Sword][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55895.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Equip this to a card with at least 1 Battle Counter. For each Battle Counter on that card, gain 500 ATK. Once that monster is destryoed, you can pay 800 Life Points to put this to the top of your deck.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Ultimate Battle of Ultimate Destruction][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55909-Ultimate_Battle_of_Ultimate_Destruction][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55909.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Increase ATK and DEF of all monster with Battle Counters on them by 500. Once per doing your Standby Phase, add 1 Battle Counter to all face-up monsters with Battle Counter effects if possible. Once this card is destroyed, you can tribute 1 monster with 1 Battle Counter to add this card to the top of your deck.[/b][/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Battle Spell][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55959-Battle_Spell][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55959.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Remove 10 Battle Counters on your side of the field to Ritual Summon "Mystical Battle Beast".[/b][/spoiler]
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[spoiler=Trap Cards]
[spoiler=Counting the Sacrifices][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55887-Counting_the_Sacrifices][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55887.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Activate only when opponent declares an attack, tribute 1 monster on your side of the field, and destroy the attacking monster. If the tributed monster has 1 or more counters on it, remove all counters, and destroy the attacking monster.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Fatal Gift][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55894-Fatal_Gift][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55894.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Remove 1 monster from your graveyard, Special Summon 1 monster with 500 or less ATK from your graveyard.[/b][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Special Black Box][URL=http://yugico.com/user/24446-Zaziuma96/card/15348-Zaziuma_s_Cards/55903-Special_Black_Box][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/55903.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[b]Add 1 Battle Counter to 1 face-up monster on your side of the field. This card can only be activated doing your opponents turn. When this card has been activated, you can pay 500 to place it on top of your deck.[/b][/spoiler]
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[Love of Ghibli]

I like the set as a whole. I did find a lot of typos (just random mispellings) but it is a great concept.


Dummy Bug: I don't understanding the wording. Does the battle counter leave the field when he's destroyed or no? Also I don't think it can equip while being attacked face-down because once a card is flipped the game enters damage calculation and the card would just die.

Keei: Is there a difference between Battle Pointer and Battle Counter?

Dreaded Sword: I don't think this is a good card. Its a conditional 500 atk boost. Why not just use Mage Power or United We Stand which do not have a condition behind and can give you better boost. I would suggest at least giving it the ability to gain battle counters in some way.

Undeniable Truth: I think this is my favorite card ever. It is so great.

Ultimate Battle of Ultimate Destruction: The its currently worded the field spell can only be saved if there is a monster with only 1 battle counter on it. I do not know if that is intentional or not. I would think it should be saved by being able to offer a monster with "1 or more" battle counters.

Counting the Sacrifices: Is that card supposed to be for battle counters or can creatures with spell counters or fog counters benefit from this card?

[Zazubat]

[quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1336531777' post='5935442']
I like the set as a whole. I did find a lot of typos (just random mispellings) but it is a great concept.
Dummy Bug: I don't understanding the wording. Does the battle counter leave the field when he's destroyed or no? Also I don't think it can equip while being attacked face-down because once a card is flipped the game enters damage calculation and the card would just die.
Keei: Is there a difference between Battle Pointer and Battle Counter?
Dreaded Sword: I don't think this is a good card. Its a conditional 500 atk boost. Why not just use Mage Power or United We Stand which do not have a condition behind and can give you better boost. I would suggest at least giving it the ability to gain battle counters in some way.
Undeniable Truth: I think this is my favorite card ever. It is so great.
Ultimate Battle of Ultimate Destruction: The its currently worded the field spell can only be saved if there is a monster with only 1 battle counter on it. I do not know if that is intentional or not. I would think it should be saved by being able to offer a monster with "1 or more" battle counters.
Counting the Sacrifices: Is that card supposed to be for battle counters or can creatures with spell counters or fog counters benefit from this card?
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Dummy Bug, basicly it's like that one Insect type in the anime, I forgot the name, but it like equips to your opponents attacking monster, and as long as that's on the field face-up you gain 1 battle counter for 1 of your monsters if possible of course.

Keei: I don't know why I made such a huge mistake, I'll fix that.

Dreaded Sword: Yeah, maybe I should boost it a bit.

Undeniable Truth: If that isn't sarcasm, thanks

Ultimate: Sorry either I'm really stupid, or I don't really get what you mean?

Counting the Sacrifices: Yes it's for all, Alien, Spell, Fog you name it.

Well thanks for the info, I'll fix the Keei, and boost Dreaded Sword a bit, and changed the effect of Dummy Bug.