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[Love of Ghibli]

This is not...good. I am so sorry to say.

First this should be in pop culture as this is blatant Narutoverse Card creation.

Second the Lore (card text) is COMPLETELY wrong. To start any effect that talks about specific monsters have to say that specific monsters WHOLE name. For example your equip card, you can't just reference the picture you have to say: This card can only be equipped to "3 Tailed Beast" "4 Tailed Beast" etc. Next when an effect talks about monsters of a certain archetype (like how Son goku says summon another tailed beast) you have to use proper grammar and say: Tailed Beast monster.

Third: There needs to be limitations on these effects. You cannot just arbitrarily sacrifice one monster to constantly get out another without setting a maximum level or giving that card a drawback.


There is a vast number of things wrong here so I would say scarp this set take a day to read at least FIVE of the tutorials on card making here and just try again later. Hate to be the bearer of bad news but sometimes we need news like this to grow.

Best of luck

[Ginko]

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This is not...good. I am so sorry to say.

First this should be in pop culture as this is blatant Narutoverse Card creation.

Second the Lore (card text) is COMPLETELY wrong. To start any effect that talks about specific monsters have to say that specific monsters WHOLE name. For example your equip card, you can't just reference the picture you have to say: This card can only be equipped to "3 Tailed Beast" "4 Tailed Beast" etc. Next when an effect talks about monsters of a certain archetype (like how Son goku says summon another tailed beast) you have to use proper grammar and say: Tailed Beast monster.

Third: There needs to be limitations on these effects. You cannot just arbitrarily sacrifice one monster to constantly get out another without setting a maximum level or giving that card a drawback.


There is a vast number of things wrong here so I would say scarp this set take a day to read at least FIVE of the tutorials on card making here and just try again later. Hate to be the bearer of bad news but sometimes we need news like this to grow.

Best of luck
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all that is needed to be said is right here
plus when posting the cards, click on the card in the cardmaker screen, then copy/paste that picture link into the forum post you are creating. that way we don't have to wait for another tab to load up just to look at your card