Kyuujin Posted May 17, 2012 Report Share Posted May 17, 2012 This is my first attempt at card making so if my OCG or the abilities of the card are off, I apologize. [img]http://i48.tinypic.com/2ecf0vc.png[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by using "Ritual of the Black Dragon King" and sacrificing 1 "Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon." Once per turn the controller of this card can pay 1000 life points to look at the hand of their opponent and send two cards to his or her graveyard. This card cannot attack during the turn this effect is used. [img]http://i45.tinypic.com/296f80.png[/img] When this card is played face-up, by tributing one "Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon," Special Summon one "Red-Eyes B. Dragon King" from your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted May 17, 2012 Report Share Posted May 17, 2012 Dude based on everything I see it looks like the first card should be a ritual monster since it can't be summoned other than with a ritual spell card that doesn't have ritual style wording.....It's only logical. Effect is way too strong. The way you've worded it, you can look a the hand but then, if you want, you can destroy two cards on the field. That is overpowered. But the art for both cards is cool, and for someone new the OCG is pretty good. Keep at it and you'll get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuujin Posted May 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2012 Thanks. My wording was a bit off, I meant you can choose two cards from their hand. But thank you for reviewing my cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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