My First Post

[7golfboy]

When this card is initially summoned, it is sent to the opponents side of the field. While it is on that side of the field, it can be used for attacks only, no tributes, rituals, etc. Also, for each turn this card stays on the field, the opponent chooses one of the two effects:

-Lose 500 Life Points each turn.

-Your opponent may not summon monsters along with this one and the one's already in play.

Your opponent may declare battle upon this card with it's, even on his/her side of the field, in which case when it is destroyed, destroy all cards on his/her side of the field. When this card is destroyed by that matter, it is sent to your side of the field, along with 100 ATK points for each card destroyed during the time on the opponent's side of the field. (Un-including the battle declared on this monster, regardless of other card effects.)

Any good? Please tell me how this works exactly cause I don't see the point in posting other than for constructive criticism.

[Lady Freya]

Okay, so the card is very interesting, although it's full of OCG errors, there's certain ways to say everything, and this doesn't line up with those, I can't really think about how to correct it, but still,

 

Now, because it's worded so differently from the average card it was hard to make out the effect, but I've gotta say, it seems interesting, and reasonably balanced, all though the last part of the effect might be a bit too powerful, because it destroys every card they have, summons it's self, and gains a potentially huge amount of attack power to attack with on a clear field. That's probably a bit much combined with the fact that they've just taken battle damage for the attack, and possibly for the effect. also, when would life points be lost for that effect, Which phase?