[warning!] extremely enraged creature lies here! >>Celestia the Angry Bunny<<

[Akeno_Ederis_17]

[color=#000080]Greatly revised the card when I realized that it was really UP'ed. thanks to Galkin. [/color]

[img]http://i49.tinypic.com/1zvqtsl.jpg[/img]
[center][i][b]New Lore:[/b][/i][/center]

[b]Cannot be special summoned. when summoned using 2 tributes: you can target and destroy up to 3 cards on the field. during each of your main phase, you can mill the top 4 cards of your deck; apply each effects if the conditions are fulfilled until the end phase of this turn:[/b]

[b]- 1 DARK monster sent: double this card's attack.[/b]
[b]- 2 DARK monsters sent: this card can attack twice this turn.[/b]
[b]- 3 DARK monsters sent: this card cannot be targeted by spells and traps.[/b]
[b]-4 Dark monsters sent: this card can attack your opponent directly.[/b]

Because cute and adorable bunnies are too mainstream, I decided to make something like this.

It's really very obvious that she's a Bunny counterpart of Lightsworn Angel Celestia. like me, she's really very pissed off on that Angel who always screw up my field.

Anyway I'm unsure whether it would support beast or dark, so instead of making it a DARK-beast, I decided to make her DARK- fiend,as I think he will be supported and will be a better support if she's a fiend rather than beast.( need your comments on this one)

Comments co-card makers?

[Be careful when posting replies, remember the new A.C ^^]

[Sir Leon]

Wow, this ugly bunny is quite powerful, lol.

[Galkin]

Wait a minute:

[quote]Cannot be [b]Special [/b]Summoned. If this card is tribute Summoned by Releasing 2 monsters: target 3 cards on the Field; destroy them. During your end phase, you can send the top 4 card of your Deck to the Graveyard. If a DARK monster is sent to the Graveyard by this effect: this card can attack twice during this turn's battle phase.[/quote]

Now can you kindly explain to me [b]how[/b] we are going to pull of that last effect? You most definitely aren't allowed to enter your battle phase after your end phase in the same turn unless mentioned in a card effect?

As it is anyways, I find it underpowered. It requires 2 tributes to apply the destroy 3 cards. It is much difficult to tribute 2 monsters than 1 and overall it is NEVER worth it unless the monster has some overpowering effect. It needs to be buffed, it's ATK and DEF are horrid to start AND it can't be Special Summoned? No one uses 2 tributes to begin with -save for LaDD and the divines- because often their effects are not worth it. The fact it needs exactly 3 cards means it might end up destroying itself, meaning you might not even apply the effect if you want.

Problems:

- Too low stats for it's requirements/summoning conditions.
- Effect only slightly buffed from a 1 tribute lightsworn monster (Who even then has a better effect).
- The last effect is impossible to apply.

[Akeno_Ederis_17]

Revised the card.

Thanks for the review sir.

Now i would like to hear your comment on the repaired one. Thanks

[Galkin]

[quote][b]Cannot be [/b][u][i][b]S[/b][/i][/u][b]pecial [u][i]S[/i][/u]ummoned. [i][u]W[/u][/i]hen summoned using 2 tributes: you can target and destroy up to 3 cards on the [i][u]F[/u][/i]ield. [u][i]Once per turn,[/i][/u] during [s] each of[/s] your main phase, you can [s]mill[/s] [i][u]send[/u][/i] the top 4 cards of your [i][u]D[/u][/i]eck [u]to the Graveyard[/u]; apply [s]each[/s] [u]the following[/u] effect[i][u](s)[/u] [/i]if the conditions are fulfilled[i][u],[/u][/i] until the end phase of this turn:[/b]

[b]- 1 DARK monster sent: double this card's [s]attack.[/s][u] ATK.[/u][/b]
[b]- 2 DARK monsters sent: this card can attack twice [u]during[/u] this turn.[/b]
[b]- 3 DARK monsters sent: this card cannot be targeted by spells and traps.[/b]
[b]-4 Dark monsters sent: this card can attack your opponent directly.[/b]
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While highly unlikely you will mill 4 monsters, it is to be noted that milling 4 DARK monsters will lead you to be able to apply all his effects and attack directly twice with a 4600 beater that will lead to 9200 damage in 1 turn. I would recommend to change it to only be able to apply 1 effect at a time with:

[quote]"apply [u]1 of [/u]the following effect(s)...[/quote]
As compensation; increase his ATK (Its written as ATK, not attack) to between 2700-3000. This way, all his effects remain powerful while not completely breaking him. The main problem was, after all, his insanely low stats for his summoning requirements.

[Akeno_Ederis_17]

Thanks again for the review, it will really help me.

I did realized that 9200 damage in 1 turn is a really bad thing, but still, you'l need luck to achieve it right?

So for now I think i will keep her like that, as you've already mentioned that the chances of me sending 4 DARK monsters to the grave is very low, so for now I'll wait for other user's review or comments so i can decide.

Again, Thank you for the patience on giving a review.

[jake#1]

It reminds me of some thing from watership down :S amyway NICE :3