Silent_moon Posted May 19, 2012 Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 So yeah I'm new to this website so if i break any rules or anything I'm SOO SORRY but i just don't really know all the rules but anyways here is a new Butterfly archetype that I made and am still making. Please comment and critique and I will do my best to follow through! By the way if you can't read one of the cards just comment and I'll post the whole text. Thank you so much! <3 Butterfly Spring - Field Spell [img]http://i.imgur.com/8HFJ5.jpg[/img] Effect: Once during your Main Phase, you can activate this card to roll a die. The following effects will be activated based on the number rolled : ~ 1 or 2 - Each face-up "Butterfly" Monster you control gains 200 ATK and DEF until your End Phase. ~ 3 or 4 - During your opponent's next turn, he or she cannot destroy or negate the effects of any of your Spell or Trap cards. ~ 5 - Only once this turn, if have no Monsters on your field, you can Special Summon 1 "Butterfly" Monster from your hand. ~ 6 - Discard 1 card from your hand and then you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. Silent Dancer in the Spring - Cont. Spell [img]http://i.imgur.com/06Gq9.jpg[/img] Butterfly's Last Wish - Counter Trap [img]http://i.imgur.com/V8LNf.jpg[/img] Effect: Activate only when a "Butterfly" Monster you control is being attacked by one of your opponent's Monsters. You can switch the attacked "Butterfly" Monster for another "Butterfly" Monster from your hand of the same Level. The original Monster is then returned to the field and if the switched Monster is not already destroyed, send it to the Graveyard. Butterfly Reinn - Effect Monster [img]http://i.imgur.com/QEtnT.jpg[/img] Butterfly Mona - Effect Monster/Tuner [img]http://i.imgur.com/wm9Lq.jpg[/img] Butterfly Luana- Effect Monster [img]http://i.imgur.com/mDTs9.jpg[/img] Butterfly Kimina - Normal Monster [img]http://i.imgur.com/moJNd.jpg[/img] Butterfly Evena - Effect Monster [img]http://i.imgur.com/bUXhu.jpg[/img] Butterfly Forre - Effect Monster [img]http://i.imgur.com/fwU0B.jpg[/img] Butterfly Midnei - Synchro/Effect [img]http://i.imgur.com/jJU7c.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted May 19, 2012 Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 It would have been better if you write out the "concept" or it's game style on your intro when making an archetype. ^^ For the Butterfly Spring For the Effect, Considering that only you can use it's effect despite it being a field card, I highly Suggest you add some disadvantages. For example is that when the dice lands on a certain number, you get to loose something. I don't see any problems with the monsters nor see the exact game style of this archetype. Anyway, I'm really disappointed that they are insects, rather than fairy type. As, if they were fairy, they might be supported by fairy support cards such as Valhalla. Considering those stats and effects, I think they won't be able to compete other archetypes nowadays. I suggest you give "Beatsticks", "Nukers", and "Summoners", as well as "spammers" if necessary , But it will depend on their game style which of these should be more numerous. The artworks are nice, very beautiful ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent_moon Posted May 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 [quote name='Zei_Ederis_17' timestamp='1337400857' post='5942316'] It would have been better if you write out the "concept" or it's game style on your intro when making an archetype. ^^ For the Butterfly Spring For the Effect, Considering that only you can use it's effect despite it being a field card, I highly Suggest you add some disadvantages. For example is that when the dice lands on a certain number, you get to loose something. I don't see any problems with the monsters nor see the exact game style of this archetype. Anyway, I'm really disappointed that they are insects, rather than fairy type. As, if they were fairy, they might be supported by fairy support cards such as Valhalla. Considering those stats and effects, I think they won't be able to compete other archetypes nowadays. I suggest you give "Beatsticks", "Nukers", and "Summoners", as well as "spammers" if necessary , But it will depend on their game style which of these should be more numerous. The artworks are nice, very beautiful ones. [/quote] Well, first off thank you for replying! But yeah I guess i should explain more about this set and I will when i completely finish and post the final thing. Uh i have decided on like, a focus for them and am currently updating and creating cards accordingly. I wanted the "Butterflies" to be a low Level and low ATK set that relies on Effects and their Field Spell. I decided that these cards would focus on getting as many cards into the grave as possible and get effects and bonuses through that and then also to swarm onto the field. Of course there wold be counters for cards that banish and such but I'm still working on it. Also, I kept them as Insect because I felt that Insect archetypes don't really turn up that often and trust me I know that Fairies can get ALOT of support but I wanted to keep these unique. Anyways I know I just said a mouthful but thanks so much for your critique! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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