jake#1 Posted May 19, 2012 Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 [IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/fkmcd2.jpg[/IMG] LORE:Cannot be normal summoned. Can only be special summoned by removing from play 3 Blackwing monsters in your graveyard. This monster gains 1000 ATK points each time a Blackwing monster on your side of the field is destroyed. At the end phase of your turn, you can destroy this card to destroy all cards on you and your opponents side of the field. He made a mistake on the cards effect ~_~ but were all human i suppose... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sckorpio Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 its ok in some ways but it would be a good idea to make it lvl 9-lvl 11 ish and 1000 is a bit to much aswell maybe 700 at the most also removing them from the grave yard is easy with that effect it would be better to banish from the field but for a 12 year old i'd say its ok. out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 Not a bad ideas at all, some mistakes I guess but I don't consider the card in it self as a bad concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 Hm... OCG Fix [size=4][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Cannot be Normal Summoned. Can only be [/background][/font][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]S[/background][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]pecial Summoned by banishing 3 Blackwing monsters from your Graveyard. This card gains 1000 ATK each time a "Blackwing" monster you control is destroyed. During your End Phase; you can destroy this card: Destroy all cards on both player's side of the field.[/background][/font][/size] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Well I kinda think the ATK is pointless. Why would your opponent try to destroy Bora who has 1700 ATK and an ehish kinda effect instead of a monster with 0 ATK who gains even more ATK when Bora is destroyed?[/background][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]If your not following me. What I mean is this card won't stay alive long enough to even have 2000 ATK. Unless your opponent doesn't a monster to kill it with it'll survive. But it won't get the ATK points if they don't have a monster to kill another BW.[/background][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]And even if you manage to get it pass 2000 ATK, a smart duelist would just side either Skill Drain or Veiler if they have it.[/background][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Sorry man... 3/10 [/background][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retroninja15 Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 [color=#FF0000][size=4]^ Agreed. . .[/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jake#1 Posted June 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2012 thanks for your criticism and ideas guys. This was his first card so it wont be perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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