LFt Posted May 19, 2012 Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 Hello everyone, I am new to the forums, nice to meet everyone. So, I made a Bionicle card, since I am a fan of Bionicles It is my first Yu-Gi-Oh card too Here it is (Reidak) as well as my other Bionicle Cards: [spoiler=2006 Sets:] [spoiler=Piraka:] [img]http://i.imgur.com/O6w2d.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/12tnu.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/HPwJK.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/qg9PU.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/GARoc.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/tdifY.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/SDBjv.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Inika:] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zhY1F.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zCnnn.jpg[/img]. [img]http://i.imgur.com/fxcGO.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/q1w8H.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/hn0FX.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/MFBTI.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Titans:] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Jrksr.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/MPxEd.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/jjGv4.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/xoP0S.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zoo0w.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/0Ohyc.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Beasts:] [img]http://i.imgur.com/sRrYs.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/gZeZX.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler] Hope you like it. I will upload other Bionicle cards here, stay tuned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted May 19, 2012 Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 It's a beatstick. Fake Types are a no-no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 [quote name='Simon Belmont' timestamp='1337457869' post='5942703'] It's a beatstick. Fake Types are a no-no. [/quote] Sorry, forgot to mention.. I intended the fake type. Besides the fake type, can you tell me what's wrong? P.S. What's a beatstick? Sorry for my low knowledge in Yu-Gi-Oh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medivh Posted May 19, 2012 Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 First off all, it's Pop Culture, so fake types don't matter. A Beatstick is a monster with high ATK for it's Level or the potential to have high ATK for it's level through it's effect. So, it's not really a Beatstick. It's a Level 5 with 1500 ATK. Also: OMGOMGOMGOMG Bionicle! I loved Bionicle as a kid. Lego sucks for discontinuing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted May 19, 2012 Report Share Posted May 19, 2012 Normally a Level 4 would have 1500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Leon Posted May 20, 2012 Report Share Posted May 20, 2012 Nice card! But I think this card should have 4 or 3 stars (level 4/3) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2012 Thanks guys I'll make more. I'll also be sure to upload the real Yu-Gi-Oh Creator's name. Thank you for your comments people! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2012 Here, I added Kazuki Takahashi as the creator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted May 20, 2012 Report Share Posted May 20, 2012 You dont need to put Kazuki Takahashi as the creator. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2012 [quote name='Simon Belmont' timestamp='1337513397' post='5943182'] You dont need to put Kazuki Takahashi as the creator. [/quote] I know, it makes the card a little more realistic (besides the type) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Dralcax Posted May 21, 2012 Report Share Posted May 21, 2012 Effects that reflect character abilites would be nice. Oh, and try starting at 2001 with Kanohi equip spells. Also, you do not pluralize Bionicle or anything in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medivh Posted May 22, 2012 Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 Sorry to nitppick, but it's Zamor Sphere launcher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 [quote name='Chaos Dralcax' timestamp='1337640652' post='5944365'] Effects that reflect character abilites would be nice. Oh, and try starting at 2001 with Kanohi equip spells. Also, you do not pluralize Bionicle or anything in it. [/quote] Yeah, I might modify the cards for effects later ^^ 2001, maybe a little later Currently I am focusing from 2006 to 2010, but when they're done i'll probably do the older ones. Thanks for the advice [quote name='HijackAttack' timestamp='1337661737' post='5944705'] Sorry to nitppick, but it's Zamor Sphere launcher. [/quote] K, advice/opinions are always good ^^ Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/p27dX.jpg[/img] Here, my first card with an effect Can you guys tell if it is correct Official Card Grammar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
7swords Posted May 22, 2012 Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 Delete the flavor text so all it says is "When this card is summoned from the graveyard it gains 500 attack." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 [quote name='7swords' timestamp='1337693260' post='5944854'] Delete the flavor text so all it says is "When this card is summoned from the graveyard it gains 500 attack." [/quote] Thank you But the OCG itself is good right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
7swords Posted May 22, 2012 Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 [quote name='LFt' timestamp='1337702019' post='5944895'] Thank you But the OCG itself is good right? [/quote] Almost look how I said it because your way adds to much confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2012 [quote name='7swords' timestamp='1337707215' post='5944943'] Almost look how I said it because your way adds to much confusion. [/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/FNRvu.jpg[/img] How bout now? Here are other effect cards I made: [img]http://i.imgur.com/PpCno.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/ef8n7.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/65ElJ.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medivh Posted May 23, 2012 Report Share Posted May 23, 2012 FIRE-Attribute instead of Fire Elemental. Vezok's eff (Corrected): When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard by a FIRE-Attribute monster, you can Special Summon it from the graveyard, and end the Battle Phase. Zaktans' eff (Corrected): When you control at least 1 other Piraka-type card, this card gains 250 ATK. Hakann's eff (Corrected): When this card is attacked by a FIRE-Attribute card, it gains 250 ATK and 300 DEF, until the End Phase. Reidak's eff (Corrected): When this card is Special Summoned from the graveyard: It gains 500 ATK. Also, you may want to consider change Reidak's effect into something like his power: "This card cannot be destroyed by battle by the same monster twice in a row (Damage calculation is applied normally)" or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted May 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2012 [quote name='HijackAttack' timestamp='1337732620' post='5945153'] FIRE-Attribute instead of Fire Elemental. Vezok's eff (Corrected): When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard by a FIRE-Attribute monster, you can Special Summon it from the graveyard, and end the Battle Phase. Zaktans' eff (Corrected): When you control at least 1 other Piraka-type card, this card gains 250 ATK. Hakann's eff (Corrected): When this card is attacked by a FIRE-Attribute card, it gains 250 ATK and 300 DEF, until the End Phase. Reidak's eff (Corrected): When this card is Special Summoned from the graveyard: It gains 500 ATK. Also, you may want to consider change Reidak's effect into something like his power: "This card cannot be destroyed by battle by the same monster twice in a row (Damage calculation is applied normally)" or something like that. [/quote] Thanks Some of them are not accurate effects, I edited some. But thank you anyways! I want to keep the current Reidak effect, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted June 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Bump, any more opinions anyone? New cards are being added and added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted August 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2012 Final addition to the Inika: Toa Inika Matoro. Hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFt Posted August 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2012 Axonn and Brutaka added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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