Red Neptune Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 I don't know if this card belongs in the Realistic cards but I just want to show him off. This is one of my first cards ever but not my first. Please tell me on some grammer problems to make it sound more realistic. The Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can't be Special Summoned exept by Tributing one Spell, Trap and Monster card from your hand to the Graveyard. This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF points for every card on your side of the feild. When your opponent attacks a monster, discard 2 Spell and/or Trap cards to negate the attack. please tell me what you think of the card.P.S.: If you don't like it being a Divine Attribute and Divine-Beast type, me and my friends just wanted to make them sound extremely powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 some errors but pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned exept by sending to the Graveyard from your hand 1 Spell, 1 Trap, and 1 Monster card. This card's original ATK and DEF is equal to the number of cards on your side of the field x 1000. When your 1 of your opponent's monsters attacks a monster on your side of the field, discard 2 Spell/Trap cards from your hand to negate the attack. Make DARK Dragon.Lower 1000 or increase to 11/12.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 overpowerd i think7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 its ok, maybe a 7 or 8.....nice effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Hero Ant Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 8/10Cool!I don't think this is overpoweredSome OCG errors (like tributing spells and traps.. lol)But overallIts ok:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 Good for a first timer...9/10 ^_^ keep up the great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 Besides a few errors which were pointed out by those above me this card is actually very nice. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 Bit "meh"... Doesn't work for me, don't know why. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 The card is pretty nice :)Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 A little overpoweredSome OCG errors7/10 :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 Text needs 2 be Caplized. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 2, 2008 Report Share Posted March 2, 2008 8/10 There are some errros, those divine things.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 I don't know if this card belongs in the Realistic cards but I just want to show him off. This is one of my first cards ever but not my first. Please tell me on some grammer problems to make it sound more realistic. The Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can't be Special Summoned exept by Tributing one Spell' date=' Trap and Monster card from your hand to the Graveyard. This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF points for every card on your side of the feild. When your opponent attacks a monster, discard 2 Spell and/or Trap cards to negate the attack. please tell me what you think of the card.P.S.: If you don't like it being a Divine Attribute and Divine-Beast type, me and my friends just wanted to make them sound extremely powerful.[/quote'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 1 Spell, Trap and Monster card from your hand. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 1000 points for each card on your side of the field. When your Opponent's monster attacks a monster your side of the field, you may discard 2 Spell/Trap cards to negate it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Some problems, but you put in some good time and effort, so, good card ^_^ BTW, 4650 posts XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tobster12 Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 nice! good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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