~ Schwarzes Leben, das Engel Abläßt ~ Cyber's latest card, (10/10 ratings)

[Lucas Maximus]

Link to image: http://majinthing.deviantart.com/art/Shades-of-Dark-2120990

[b][u] Schwarzes Leben, das Engel Abläßt [/b][/u]
[IMG]http://i28.tinypic.com/aw8eph.jpg[/IMG]

Inverted Image & Inverted card version(S):

[b][u] Schwarzes Leben, das Engel Abläßt [/b][/u]
[IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/29mn4hd.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i25.tinypic.com/x1k3n5.jpg[/IMG]

[i]When this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle, select 1 Monster Card and 2 non-Monster Cards from your hand. Your opponent randomly selects 1 of the 3 cards. If it is the Monster Card, it is immediately Special Summoned in face-up Attack or Defense Position and the remaining 2 cards are sent to the Graveyard. If it is not a Monster Card, all 3 cards are sent to the bottom of your deck.[/i]

[shonenhikada]

nice unique name,finally someone with a unique and new name. Only one problem WTF does it mean.

[CrazyKev]

The name and pic is cool.

The card is cool too

Though, Graveyard needs to be capitalized

[Careless Whisper]

the only word I'm having trouble with is Leben, I know the other ones so here's what I came up with "Black ____, the Angel Ablast" with an umlout over the A and some other symbole over the S.

[Slash]

Good Pic

Overall good card 8/10 ^_^

[peacekid]

I like the card, but horrible picture to go with it. German + Anime = no

[shonenhikada]

i got the sucker translated this is what it means,it German by the way.

 

Black life that angel lets out

[Careless Whisper]

Yes, I think we realized it's german, so in other words, the actual name of this card is

 

"Angel of Black Life"

[Lucas Maximus]

Thank you all very much for your ratings. ^_^

 

And the actual name of the card is Angel Of Black Life, so anomu was correct, well done.

 

Anymore ratings?

[Starpelt]

I like it, the name is original and the effect is pretty good too ^.^ 9/10

[Lucas Maximus]

Thanks man, i'm glad my card is getting good ratings. :D

[redsox1895]

ohooooooo there asome 10/10

[Lucas Maximus]

Thankyou very much redsox, 10/10 yay. ^_^

[MarbleZone]

The effect sounds vaguely familiar to this card here... ;)

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Chosen_One

[Lucas Maximus]

The effect sounds vaguely familiar to this card here... ;)

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Chosen_One

 

I always try to base my effects on spell and trap cards to make my cards more unique, i obviously change the effect and maybe give it a little twist, but still i think its a great idea. ^_^

 

Anyway what rating do you give it?

 

I'm about to add the inverted card version also.

[kid]

8/10 errors but good try :)

[Lucas Maximus]

8/10 errors but good try :)

 

Thanks for the rating kid but when you say 'errors but good try' do you mind stating the errors for me, it would really help me out. O_o

[kid]

you got some capital errors

[Luna Diviner]

9/10

Wicked but the name isn't as original as you think.

[Lucas Maximus]

Ok thanks MCR and Kid, I'm very pleased you like my card. ^_^

[Master Ingo]

Cool :D 8/10

[Lucas Maximus]

Thanks Lord_Tobi. :D

Anymore ratings?

[Ultima™]

9/10

[Chevalier]

Capitalize the G in Graveyard. But nice card.

[God of Cadillacs]

Awesome cards.