Comit Posted May 26, 2012 Report Share Posted May 26, 2012 [center][color=#0000ff][font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][b][size=6]"Super Legend" [/size][/b][/font][/color][/center] [center][color=#0000ff][font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][b][size=6]Card Gallery[/size][/b][/font][/color][/center] [center]As a kid I grew up liking super heroes and villains, and Yu-Gi-Oh.[/center] [center]"So why not mash it up?", I asked myself.[/center] [center]This post will be bringing you heroes and villains from DC Comics, Marvel, and anonymous shows and video games such as Mortal Kombat, and Ben 10.[/center] [center]Will be adding cards depending on how much support I get. For every fifth comment I will add a card. For every LIKE I earn I will update a card as soon as I can.[/center] [center]The next card I will post after getting 10 comments.[/center] [center][color=#ff8c00][size=4][b][u]Unlock Cards[/u][/b][/size][/color][/center] [center]Superman - opening card[/center] [center]The Flash - 5 comments Spiderman - 10 comments[/center] [center]Will be taking suggestions; not requests.[/center] [center]Thank you, and enjoy the "Super Legends".[/center] [IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/348t106.jpg[/IMG] Lore: Once during each Standby Phase, place 1 Super Counter on this card (Max 3). Once per turn, you can remove 1 Super Counter from this card and place it on 1 monster your opponent controls. A monster with a Super Counter placed on it by this card's effect cannot declare an attack or switch from its Original Battle Position. [spoiler=The Flash] [center][IMG]http://i48.tinypic.com/1085pqa.jpg[/IMG] Lore: This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. [/center][/spoiler] [spoiler=Superman] [center][img]http://i48.tinypic.com/2j49093.jpg[/img][/center] [center]Lore:[/center] [center]This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 2 "Super Legend" monsters you control. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card inflicts piercing damage. While this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select another "Super Legend" monster you control as an attack target.[/center] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted May 27, 2012 Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 Your OCG looks good. Looking at the picture at first I thought it might be slightly pixilated. I looked closer, though, and it seems fine. You've chosen an interesting Attribute for Superman, considering his space-faring abilities. Yes, I know there are solar winds in space. I think he might be suited to being a LIGHT- or FIRE-type as well, especially considering his strength under our yellow sun. This being Superman I believe his ATK and DEF should be better balanced. He's pretty much an all-round powerhouse character. Are you going to turn his abilities (speed, flight, ice breath, laser vision, etc.) into Spell cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comit Posted May 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2012 Thanks man! My OCG isn't perfect, but I thought it was decent as well. I will stick with the WIND attribute though, but thanks for the ideas, and yes man that sounds like a plan! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted June 1, 2012 Report Share Posted June 1, 2012 You should give him a ridiculously broken effect if he's alongside Helios - The Primordial Sun. Also, I'd make him 2900, just for originality. There's way too many things that are 2800 now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fonzy89 Posted June 1, 2012 Report Share Posted June 1, 2012 That is very odd. The cards atk and def strengths are in an odd font for a Yu-Gi-Oh card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comit Posted June 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 I want my cards to be playable, not broken because broken cards are useless and over powered which won't make it fair for the opponent. Thanks for the criticism though.[quote name='Fonzy89' timestamp='1338591873' post='5950574'] That is very odd. The cards atk and def strengths are in an odd font for a Yu-Gi-Oh card. [/quote] Yeah, but that's the font of the card making software I use so I hope it won't bother you as much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted June 2, 2012 Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Flash looks good. One question: what did you have in mind with the effect where he attacks twice in the same Battle Phase? Is that for times when the opponent has one or less monsters? Also, Flash is one of the fastest Speedsters on the pages of comics. Are you planning a higher-level version that can affect Chain Resolution if he goes fast enough, or something like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted June 2, 2012 Report Share Posted June 2, 2012 Flash is redundant. The effect you want is "This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each." The rest doesn't really make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comit Posted June 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2012 [quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1338646865' post='5950933'] Flash looks good. One question: what did you have in mind with the effect where he attacks twice in the same Battle Phase? Is that for times when the opponent has one or less monsters? Also, Flash is one of the fastest Speedsters on the pages of comics. Are you planning a higher-level version that can affect Chain Resolution if he goes fast enough, or something like that? [/quote] Since he's super fast then he can attack them twice. That's what gave me the idea for his effect, and I have no clue about your idea man. I'm just making these as I go along, ha.[quote name='Expelsword - ä¿¡ä»°' timestamp='1338648781' post='5950939'] Flash is redundant. The effect you want is "This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each." The rest doesn't really make sense. [/quote] Your saying his not useful, right? Thanks. Will fix the OCG, and the second part of the effect is so he may attack each opponent's monster twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted June 3, 2012 Report Share Posted June 3, 2012 Redundant means unnecessary. I.e. since he can already attack all monsters, having him attack twice doesn't change anything. If you want him to double attack that way, though, change it to "twice each". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted June 4, 2012 Report Share Posted June 4, 2012 What's the point of attacking a monster twice? If you defeat it, it's destroyed. If you don't you'll lose more Lifepoints, and your monster might be destroyed. I have little doubt Flash is fast enough to attack a monster again before it falls completely, but don't you think that's overkill, just slightly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comit Posted June 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2012 The two of you have a point. I'll remove the second part of the effect. Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted June 5, 2012 Report Share Posted June 5, 2012 Now he looks to be right for a Level-4, and the effect makes sense for a Speedster. I like that he's not terribly powerful, so his effect doesn't make him a copy of cards like "Elemental HERO Wildedge." Although Flash does not generally look like a powerhouse, I have read on numerous vs threads that he is fast enough to be able to travel through time. In these threads he almost invariably can defeat his opponent by going back in time to prevent his/her birth, which is where I got the idea that he could disrupt gameplay involving speed, like chain resolution. It's the type of effect that does not yet exist in the official game, yet it fits Flash as the Fastest Man Alive (incidentally it was proven in [i]JLA/Avengers[/i] that he's a faster Speedster than Quicksilver from the Marvelverse, because Quicksilver's speed comes from a mutation whereas Flash's speed comes from the Speed Force, like most other Speedsters of the DCU). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comit Posted June 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2012 Thanks for the advice man, but that seems like a lot of work your giving me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted June 17, 2012 Report Share Posted June 17, 2012 Take or leave the suggestions as you like. Question about Spider-Man: how or when can the Counters be removed from monsters he targets? And does his effect equally affect high-level monsters as well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The-Nemian-Lion Posted July 8, 2013 Report Share Posted July 8, 2013 To under powered super man can carry rocket can obelisk P.S flash and spider put the word under in under powered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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