Elemental Hero Eric Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 When this card is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it. When you Special Summon it this way, this card gains the following effect:When this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Magna Oceanus" monster, that monster gains 400 ATK. When this card in the Graveyard is removed from play, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. That monster loses 200 ATK and DEF. You can only Special Summon 1 "Oceanus" monster from your hand per turn. When this card is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it. When you Special Summon it this way, this card gains the following effect:While you control 1 face-up "Oceanus" monster, other than this card, you can add 1 "Oceanus" Equip-Spell card to your hand instead of conducting your normal draw phase. You can only Special Summon 1 "Oceanus" monster from your hand per turn. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is the only card in your hand, you can remove from play 1 "Oceanus" monster to Special Summon this card. When you Special Summon it this way, this card gains the following effect:While you control 1 face-up "Oceanus" monster, other than this card, this card's ATK becomes 2400. When this card is the only face-up "Oceanus" monster you control, it's ATK becomes 1900. You can only Special Summon 1 "Oceanus" monster from your hand per turn. When this card is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it. When you Special Summon it this way, this card gains the following effect:While you control 1 face-up "Oceanus" monster, other than this card, you may select 1 monster your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed, destroy the selected monster. You can only Special Summon 1 "Oceanus" monster from your hand per turn. When this card is the only card in your hand, you can Special Summon it. When you Special Summon it this way, this card gains the following effect:When this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Magna Oceanus" monster, you gain 1000 life points. When this card in the graveyard is removed from play, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's life points. You can only Special Summon 1 "Oceanus" monster from your hand per turn. 1 "Oceanus" tuner + 1 or more non-tuner "Oceanus" monsterThis card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. When this card is Synchro Summoned, this card gains one of the following effects:o If this card was Synchro Summoned with Oceanus Pugnator, you may activate this effect once per turn: You can have this card lose 500 ATK to destroy 1 card on the field. This card cannot attack on the turn you activate this effect.o If this card was Synchro Summoned with Oceanus Pulchra, you may activate this effect once per turn: You can pay 800 life points to select 1 card in your graveyard. Add that card to your deck, then shuffle your deck.*the lower case o's represent bullet points 1 "Oceanus" tuner + 1 or more non-tuner "Oceanus" monsterThis card cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon. When this card is Synchro Summoned, this card gains one of the following effects:o If this card was Synchro Summoned with Oceanus Pugnator, your opponent cannot activate traps during your battle phase.o If this card was Synchro Summoned with Oceanus Pulchra, your opponent cannot select another "Oceanus" monster as an attack target. You can only have 1 "Magna Oceanus Locusta" on the field at a time. These are my first cards, so any help with grammar, effects, ways to improve etc. would be greatly appreciated. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 Nice cards I really like them. 9/10 six things though. These look sort of like a rip off of the infernity archetype seeing as they both relly on having no cards in your hand.I really like your pics.You need spell and trap support toA.get cards out of your handB. just all around supportAnd also you need more monstersAn opinion the effects based off of synchro material are great and all but any synchro monster you at won't have effects like those so you might want to change thatAnd finnaly these belong in the fineshed set catagory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elemental Hero Eric Posted June 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 Nice cards I really like them. 9/10 six things though. These look sort of like a rip off of the infernity archetype seeing as they both relly on having no cards in your hand.I really like your pics.You need spell and trap support toA.get cards out of your handB. just all around supportAnd also you need more monstersAn opinion the effects based off of synchro material are great and all but any synchro monster you at won't have effects like those so you might want to change thatAnd finnaly these belong in the fineshed set catagory. Thank you for the rating. Spell and traps are on the waysame with more monstersim not sure what you mean by the synchro effect thingand as for these belonging in the finished set catagory i don't think they do because i am still making more of them, but i am not sure that is how this works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 Thank you for the rating. Spell and traps are on the waysame with more monstersim not sure what you mean by the synchro effect thingand as for these belonging in the finished set catagory i don't think they do because i am still making more of them, but i am not sure that is how this works.By synchro effect thingy I mean the effect beased off of the tuner used to summon it.It's just one persons opinion though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retroninja15 Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 Weird..i have the urge to eat sea food. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elemental Hero Eric Posted June 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Weird..i have the urge to eat sea food.wow... what a helpful comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 It is? BTW another thought.Some of these should probaly sea serpent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elemental Hero Eric Posted June 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 It is? BTW another thought.Some of these should probaly sea serpenti was being sarcastic as their post was very obviously spam. and anyway, i guess some could be sea serpents, like hyacintho or locusta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hell Marquis - Kokonoe Posted June 11, 2012 Report Share Posted June 11, 2012 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/277503-important-advanced-clause-discussion-starts-midnight-may-8th-gmt/ Next time, please follow the above in order to make your topic legal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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