Dragon X set(my first set)

[ShinyMonster]

I made this like it was a real deck. So i made how many of each cards there are. Hope you enjoy. Please rate and criticise my deck. And give me ideas of how to improve :3.

MONSTERS!

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SPELLS!

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TRAPS!

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XYZ!

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TOKENS !

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[The X Khraken 7]

Parent Dragon's ATK is a little too high for a level 5 monster. And Heat Dragon's effect seems really broken. Dragon X's ATK and DEF are slightly too high, and his effect is evil. Cards like that should have more difficult summoning conditions.

But other than those 3, these cards seem well done. The normal monsters have fitting flavour texts, and the pictures go along with the cards nicely.

looks like we have the same tastes in dragon pictures, considering I used at least 3 of those dragon pictures for my "Dragon's Of Elements" that I made a few days ago.

(Dragon of time and Dragon of space... did anybody else think of Dialga and Palkia when they saw those 2 cards?)

And one other thing, i noticed the Elemental hero Dragon #1's effect states loss of HP, not LP

Most cards nowadays read like this "decrease your opponents life points by *insert amount here* " so I suggest adjusting his effect to correspond with the speech style of what i just typed

[ShinyMonster]

thanks for ur criticism and ideas and help !

i also noticed the effect of thunder didnt make sencse haha sorry... And also, to summon dragon of the world you need to lose 2000 HP and 2 monsters. for dragon X you gotta lose 3000 HP and 1 monster so theres 5000 HP gone.. so its attack is kinda worth it dont u think ?

[Bolkrac]

soy nuevo y e de decir que al igual que tu me encantan los dragones y me parece una gran baraja
y a ora me permites una pregunta ¿como conseguiste esas imajenes?

[nicholasvassel]

where did you make the Xyz card? on the other hand these cards look really great did you draw all the dragon or did you get them from from the internet? cause they look awesome

[ShinyMonster]

sorry about the long reply. The link to make xyz cards is on the cards themselves. And thanks for you comment and no i got pics of google images.

[WORMGOLGAR]

Sorry to say this, but you worded almost everything completely wrong. You should read the text on real cards to see how it is worded. Also, what do you mean "The link to make Xyz monsters is on the cards themselves"? I am DYING to make Xyz! Also, Thunder Dragon is a real card FYI.

[SumoBanana]

I'm not sure if you deliberately did this but most or all of you cards have been duplicated. Anyway, great ideas! I'd like to see more of your cards!