kendrick sendersson ovak Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 this is the last dark element monster it's more strongest than th last one: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest White Tiger Power Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 1st card: has numerous problems. You should look at some real Ritual Spell cards to learn how you should put the effects. "Should" is "Must". "Should pay 500 Life points or Discard 2 cards from their hands" should be "Must pay 500 Life Points or Discard 2 cards from their hands" 2/10 Second card: Can't read the lore. but what i can read makes it Extremely OP'd.01/10 Overall 3/20Do you even know ANYTHING about ritual cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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kendrick sendersson ovak Posted June 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 1st card: has numerous problems. You should look at some real Ritual Spell cards to learn how you should put the effects. "Should" is "Must". "Should pay 500 Life points or Discard 2 cards from their hands" should be "Must pay 500 Life Points or Discard 2 cards from their hands" 2/10 Second card: Can't read the lore. but what i can read makes it Extremely OP'd.01/10 Overall 3/20Do you even know ANYTHING about ritual cards?mr. joke your first note is okay but the second one... i think you have some problems in your eyes i think you should go to the doctor. last thing it's not a matter if i write 2 or two. 1st card: has numerous problems. You should look at some real Ritual Spell cards to learn how you should put the effects. "Should" is "Must". "Should pay 500 Life points or Discard 2 cards from their hands" should be "Must pay 500 Life Points or Discard 2 cards from their hands" 2/10 Second card: Can't read the lore. but what i can read makes it Extremely OP'd.01/10 Overall 3/20Do you even know ANYTHING about ritual cards?mr. joke your first note is okay but the second one... i think you have some problems in your eyes i think you should go to the doctor. last thing it's not a matter if i write 2 or two. 1st card: has numerous problems. You should look at some real Ritual Spell cards to learn how you should put the effects. "Should" is "Must". "Should pay 500 Life points or Discard 2 cards from their hands" should be "Must pay 500 Life Points or Discard 2 cards from their hands" 2/10 Second card: Can't read the lore. but what i can read makes it Extremely OP'd.01/10 Overall 3/20Do you even know ANYTHING about ritual cards?mr. joke your first note is okay but the second one... i think you have some problems in your eyes i think you should go to the doctor. last thing it's not a matter if i write 2 or two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest White Tiger Power Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 mr. joke your first note is okay but the second one... i think you have some problems in your eyes i think you should go to the doctor. last thing it's not a matter if i write 2 or two. I never said it mattered if you wrote "2" or "two". I said it mattered whether you wrote "Should" or "Must".Secondly my eyes are fine. I said the lore was too small because the effect(s) is/are so long. In future you should Write out the lore under the card(s) you post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retroninja15 Posted June 10, 2012 Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Kso is now consider a troll. . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kendrick sendersson ovak Posted June 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2012 Kso is now consider a troll. . .i won't comment on that.... i'm sorry white tiger power for the first thing but about your eyes you must focus to read a long lore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hell Marquis - Kokonoe Posted June 11, 2012 Report Share Posted June 11, 2012 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/277503-important-advanced-clause-discussion-starts-midnight-may-8th-gmt/ Follow the Advanced Clause please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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