Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 well this guy comes in all shape and sizes to summon this all powerfull mage of great dark arts 3 "living willing souls" must be offered to resurrect him but he truly never dies where ever evil is puunjuise-zaar is there creating it when you think he gone for good he revives AND MORPH HIMSELF INTO A STRONGER FORM as evil allways finds a way .... to come back [Spoiler=Puunjuise-Zaar] [Spoiler=Please Welcome, Puunjuise-Daar] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Puunjuise-ZaarTheNewlyAwaken.jpg[/img] You can Special Summon from your Hand by sending 3 monsters you control to the Graveyard (cannot be Set) When Special Summoned your Opponent must reveal their Hand and set as many Spell and Trap cards from their Hand as possibile (cards set by this card's effect can not be activated at this time). This card can not lose or gain Level(s). This card can not be destoryed by card's effects. Up to twice per turn during any player's Battle Phase when this card would be destoryed in battle you can activate one of these effects instead: *shift this card to DEF Position and its DEF becomes 0 until the End Phase. (this card must be in ATK Position to activate this effect) *shift this card to ATK Position and its ATK becomes 0 until the End Phase. (this card must be in DEF Position to activate this effect) During the End Phase, destory 1 Spell or Trap card on the Field or destory this card. When this card is destoryed in battle or by this card's effect, Special Summon 1 monster with "Puunjuise-Zaar" with in its name that has 1 more Level than this card from your Hand, Deck, Graveyard or, Banish Zone in ATK Position. You can only Control 1 face-up monster with "Puunjuise Zaar" in its name. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Puunjuise-Daar's 2nd Form] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Puunjuise-ZaarTheEverLiving.jpg[/img] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by "Puunjuise-Zaar, The Newly Awaken", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Special Summon, or once per turn during any player's turn you can add 1 "Puunjuise-Zaar, The Newly Awaken" from your Deck, Graveyard or, Banish Zone to your Hand then discard 1 card except "Puunjuise-Zaar, The Newly Awaken". this card's effect becomes "Puunjuise Zaar, The Newly Awaken" effects until the End Phase. This face-up card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster. This card inflict Peircing Damage. You can only Control 1 face-up "Puunjuise Zaar, The Ever Lasting". [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Puunjuise-Daar's 3rd Form] [img]http://i758.photobucket.com/albums/xx221/judedudemud3/Puunjuise-ZaarTheDreadedLordOfAll.jpg[/img] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by "Puunjuise-Zaar, The Ever Living", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Special Summon or once per turn during any player's turn you can add 1 "Puunjuise-Zaar, The Newly Awaken" from your Deck, Graveyard or, Banish Zone to your Hand then discard 1 card except "Puunjuise-Zaar, The Newly Awaken", this card's effect becomes "Puunjuise-Zaar, The Newly Awaken" effects until the End Phase. Once per turn during any player's turn you can send 1 card on the Field or 1 random card in your Opponent's Hand to the Graveyard. This card inflict Peircing Damage. This face-up card is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type and Zombie-Type monster. you can only Control 1 face-up "Puunjuise-Zaar, The Dreaded Lord Of All". [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sckorpio Posted June 18, 2012 Report Share Posted June 18, 2012 You need gramar check you no spell right. By the way your cards are op and up at the same with out being ballanced. All together 4/10 (better than some) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted June 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 [quote name='sckorpio' timestamp='1340048777' post='5958827'] You need gramar check you no spell right. By the way your cards are op and up at the same with out being ballanced. All together 4/10 (better than some) [/quote] ingoring post ! can not understand you ! and you need to fully explain in you post anthor reason why im ingoring that post ! and ... my word speak the queen's english quite yes bloody h3ll rather yes they seem balanced to me ? not op ? you need to fully explain how you have come that conclusion and must fully explain your findings on whether or not it is balanced and or OP'ed quite yes rather bloody h3ll rather yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
7swords Posted June 19, 2012 Report Share Posted June 19, 2012 I think it is a little over powered but I like the idea. It reminds me a lot of Yubel... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted June 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2012 need more of a explaination why you think its op or its treated as spam yubel saw oblisk in a bar once late at night it was love at first sight when a mommy and the daddy love each other very munch they have a baby that bouncing baby boy is puunjuise-zaar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted July 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvernstorm Posted July 3, 2012 Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 Errr....the Grammar, dude, i don't understand. There's no "dot" mark, which makes ur explanation very confusing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted July 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 forum will not do the dot thing live with it the mod need to edit that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvernstorm Posted July 3, 2012 Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 [quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1341304999' post='5966187'] forum will not do the dot thing live with it the mod need to edit that [/quote] You don't say.....LOL You mean u don't need to use "dot", cos the mods are gonna edit ur post? lolol... What i'm trying to say is, with u using "dot", people can understand ur posts more, it's very helping u know. Just saying... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted July 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 [quote name='Wyvernstorm' timestamp='1341305418' post='5966191'] You don't say.....LOL You mean u don't need to use "dot", cos the mods are gonna edit ur post? lolol... What i'm trying to say is, with u using "dot", people can understand ur posts more, it's very helping u know. Just saying... [/quote] baka *=black dot live with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted July 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 17, 2012 Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 There's nothing wrong with making a complex card if the effects are all part of the design (e.g. Malefic Stardust Dragon). But it seems like these cards just have a bunch of effects with no connection to each other except "hurt your opponent". This isn't a balance issue; this is aesthetic. Perhaps simpler effects are in order? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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