My first card.

[JSRFSonicHeadDX]

I've been trying not to make any over powered cards. So I made a realistic card.

[img]http://i1267.photobucket.com/albums/jj555/AnonymiseIMGS/createcardphp.jpg[/img]

Effect: Sacrifice 1000 life points to return 5 cards from the graveyard to your deck. Sacrifice an additional 500 life points to return two Level 4 monster cards from the graveyard to your hand.

Note: This card may not be to balanced. I am a NewB but I understand the balance of cards. Also there is a typo in the effect box. The fix is in the Effect sentence under the card.

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[Mlaxeson]

Too be honest I think it's far too weak. Pot of Avarice allows you to return 5 monsters to the deck and then draw two cards and you're paying 1000LP to do the same? doesn't seem worth it.

However, Pot of Avarice is Limited because of it's effect, and I take it that because you've made this a [b]Continuous[/b] Spell Card you've intended repeated use. Therefore you're right in making the cost greater. But still, seems too much....

OCG corrections:
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Once per Turn; You may pay[/b] 1000 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints to return [b]up to[/b] 5 cards from the [b]G[/b]raveyard to your [b]D[/b]eck. [b]You may pay[/b] an additional 500 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints to return [b]up to[/b] two Level 4 [b]M[/b]onster [b]C[/b]ards from the [b]G[/b]raveyard to your [b]H[/b]and.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

[size=3][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Ah, didn't see that before, did you mean to return the Monster Cards to you're Hand? That alone maybe worth the 1500LP....[/background][/font][/color][/size]
[background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3]Have I misunderstood? did you intend the returning of the 5 cards to the Deck as a cost? Like with Avarice?[/size][/color][/font][/background]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]In which case, maybe this?:[/background][/size][/font][/color]
[b]Once per Turn; You may pay[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] 1000 [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]L[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]ife [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]P[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]oints to return [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]up to[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] 5 cards [b](at least 3?) [/b]from the [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]G[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]raveyard to your [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]D[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]eck. [b]Return up to[/b][/background][/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]two Level 4 [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]M[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]onster [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]C[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]ards from the [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]G[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]raveyard to your [/background][/size][/font][/color][b]H[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]and.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Still seems very underpowered anyhow....[/background][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]You need to think about (and post) how you intend this card to be used.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]So far is good for a first card, mine were terrible 3/10 [/background][/size][/font][/color]

[JSRFSonicHeadDX]

I knew you'd say that I made some minor adjustments.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/qPw7y.jpg[/img]

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][b]Once per Turn; You may pay[/b] 500 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints to return [b]up to[/b] 5 cards from the [b]G[/b]raveyard to [b]the top of[/b] your [b]D[/b]eck. [b]You may pay[/b] an additional 200 [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints to return [b]up to[/b] two Level 4 [b]M[/b]onster [b]C[/b]ards from the [b]G[/b]raveyard to [b]The Field[/b].[/background][/size][/font][/color]

Your edits are included.
Thanks.

[Sckorpio]

alot better than the original

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

edit the oringial post do not repost the revised edition of the card

[JSRFSonicHeadDX]

Next time that's what I'll do. I'm almost used to YCM's forums. Just have to make a little adjustments.