CoolMam132 Posted June 20, 2012 Report Share Posted June 20, 2012 This is my first complete sets. I call it "DEMONS AND FLAMES". Hope you enjoy it. Please reply this which card is the most realistic for you. I'm a beginner card maker and beginner OCG so right now i'm still using the old OCG and still looking for examples from the real old Yu-Gi-Oh cards grammar. So, the beginner duelist can understand these cards. Update: (Some moment after i uploaded this, i decided to fix it. Anyway, I didn't know that 1 character from my cards is from a real video game (named "Darksiders") But i already upload it. ) [img]http://i.imgur.com/A3DJd.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/9HTti.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ca2q9.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/uLByc.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/JmN6d.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/OrASG.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/5XLB0.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/xVo0S.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/uRd6l.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Vl2Y3.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/cY9yY.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/eWOZC.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/KJhsa.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/aupSD.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/mz7pu.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/RvDuf.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 21, 2012 Report Share Posted June 21, 2012 The pictures on these cards are very good, ill give you that. But your OCG is unbearable, your cards hardly make sense, you spelled words wrong and you don't capitalize. Many many cards are OP, especially Hand Of Monsters, that card is ridiculous, takes 3 attacks to get destroyed and can pick 2 monsters, after picking 1 of the types stated in the effect, you then special summon them after 3 opponent turns. THAT IS UNBELIEVABLE and would be banned, and even burned too. 4/10 Fix your work please look it over Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoolMam132 Posted June 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2012 [quote name='Legiit' timestamp='1340247345' post='5960163'] The pictures on these cards are very good, ill give you that. But your OCG is unbearable, your cards hardly make sense, you spelled words wrong and you don't capitalize. Many many cards are OP, especially Hand Of Monsters, that card is ridiculous, takes 3 attacks to get destroyed and can pick 2 monsters, after picking 1 of the types stated in the effect, you then special summon them after 3 opponent turns. THAT IS UNBELIEVABLE and would be banned, and even burned too. 4/10 Fix your work please look it over [/quote] Thanks for your opinion. I'll fix it as soon as i can. Anyway, i found the words that spelled wrong. Actually, i did not spell it wrong. it just the the problem of the card maker system cutted some of alphabets. But what is the meaning of OP? Remember, I'm a beginner card maker means i'm a beginner OCG. So, if something wrong with my cards, just tell me what is wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted June 21, 2012 Report Share Posted June 21, 2012 [quote name='CoolMam132' timestamp='1340269013' post='5960309'] Thanks for your opinion. I'll fix it as soon as i can. Anyway, i found the words that spelled wrong. Actually, i did not spell it wrong. it just the the problem of the card maker system cutted some of alphabets. But what is the meaning of OP? Remember, I'm a beginner card maker means i'm a beginner OCG. So, if something wrong with my cards, just tell me what is wrong. [/quote] True, OP means Over Powered, Hand of Monsters needs to be look overed because its Over Powered like crazy. And i do understand your a new card maker, i didn't mean to be harsh, im just explaining my thoughts. Sorry if i offended you EDIT** ok awesome you fixed it, its OK now, but in the real Yu-gi-Oh world, i think that card would be limited 1 per deck im pretty sure. I fixed my rating to 6.3/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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