Wyvernstorm Posted June 28, 2012 Report Share Posted June 28, 2012 This is my first Spell Card Rate this card and leave comment please [img]http://i.imgur.com/i7ppl.jpg[/img] Description: You can only activate this card if there is no monster card on your side of the field during your opponent's Battle Phase when he/she declares an attack. Special Summon 1 Machine type monster in attack position from your Extra Deck (the effect of the summoned monster won't be activated if there). Your opponent must attack the summoned monster using all their monster cards if possible. The summoned monster will be removed from play at the end of the turn this card's effect activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted June 28, 2012 Report Share Posted June 28, 2012 Here's some slightly better OCG: [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]You can only activate this card if there is no monster card on your side of the field during your opponent's Battle Phase when he/she declares an attack. Special Summon 1 Machine type monster in Attack Position from your deck. Your opponent must attack the summoned monster using all their monster cards if possible. Banish the summoned monster at the end of the turn this card's effect activated.[/background][/size][/font][/color] It's not too bad for a first-timer, but I can definitely see potential for abuse, primarily because there is absolutely no restrictions on the Machine you can summon. Most of the big, scary ones are Nomi or Semi-Nomi, granted, but if you summon from the Extra Deck (what the Fusion Deck is called nowadays because of Synchros and Xyzs), you can put out something really beastly, if only briefly. I'd limit it to only being summoned from the Deck, and then limit the monster based on its Level rather than on its ATK. There's definitely room for improvement, but it's not awful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvernstorm Posted June 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2012 [quote name='Stan Alda' timestamp='1340882518' post='5963392'] Here's some slightly better OCG: [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]You can only activate this card if there is no monster card on your side of the field during your opponent's Battle Phase when he/she declares an attack. Special Summon 1 Machine type monster in Attack Position from your deck. Your opponent must attack the summoned monster using all their monster cards if possible. Banish the summoned monster at the end of the turn this card's effect activated.[/background][/size][/font][/color] It's not too bad for a first-timer, but I can definitely see potential for abuse, primarily because there is absolutely no restrictions on the Machine you can summon. Most of the big, scary ones are Nomi or Semi-Nomi, granted, but if you summon from the Extra Deck (what the Fusion Deck is called nowadays because of Synchros and Xyzs), you can put out something really beastly, if only briefly. I'd limit it to only being summoned from the Deck, and then limit the monster based on its Level rather than on its ATK. There's definitely room for improvement, but it's not awful. [/quote] Thanks for your critics, you have points. Well, a player may one-turn-kill his opponent using this card's effect if the conditions are met, but i think the effect of this card itself is pretty much balanced. Can you please give me a more descriptive reasoning about the problem? If the problem is about the high possibility of one turn killing the opponent using this card, i think zane's deck can do much better without using this card. I think there are few cards which can be special summoned from extra/fusion deck, like summoning cyber-twin dragon or cyber end dragon, its effect won't be nulled even if it's special summoned by Metamorphosis or such. Besides, this card's effect can be negated by Magic Jammer or such.. I've added some limitation in this card's effect, and i'll say this is a Limited card. Still waiting for another comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted June 28, 2012 Report Share Posted June 28, 2012 [quote name='Wyvernstorm' timestamp='1340888723' post='5963413'] Thanks for your critics, you have points. Well, a player may one-turn-kill his opponent using this card's effect if the conditions are met, but i think the effect of this card itself is pretty much balanced. Can you please give me a more descriptive reasoning about the problem? If the problem is about the high possibility of one turn killing the opponent using this card, i think zane's deck can do much better without using this card. I think there are few cards which can be special summoned from extra/fusion deck, like summoning cyber-twin dragon or cyber end dragon, its effect won't be nulled even if it's special summoned by Metamorphosis or such. Besides, this card's effect can be negated by Magic Jammer or such.. I've added some limitation in this card's effect, and i'll say this is a Limited card. Still waiting for another comment. [/quote] That makes sense. To be fair, I can't think of any specific OTK combos off the top of my head; I try to avoid those, you see. I personally don't consider negating cards like Magic Jammer to be a really legitimate downside; they're practically a given. As for limiting the card itself, I haven't heard of that before; usually it's critics that make that judgement, not the card's creator. But it does seem a bit more fair as Limited, or Semi-Limited at most. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvernstorm Posted June 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2012 [quote name='Stan Alda' timestamp='1340889993' post='5963424'] That makes sense. To be fair, I can't think of any specific OTK combos off the top of my head; I try to avoid those, you see. I personally don't consider negating cards like Magic Jammer to be a really legitimate downside; they're practically a given. As for limiting the card itself, I haven't heard of that before; usually it's critics that make that judgement, not the card's creator. But it does seem a bit more fair as Limited, or Semi-Limited at most. [/quote] Thanks, i rlly appreciate ur comments and critics. Can u please check my other cards out as well, those cards won't disappoint u i bet ya here's the link http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/285069-lvl-10-12-fire-dragon-endless-fire/page__pid__5963472#entry5963472 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peterjackson Posted June 30, 2012 Report Share Posted June 30, 2012 [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Special Summon 1 Machine type monster in Attack Position from your deck. Your opponent must attack the summoned monster using all their monster cards if possible. [/background][/size][/font][/color]You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up card on the field; return it to the bottom of the Deck. Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to the activation of this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meowyultimate Posted June 30, 2012 Report Share Posted June 30, 2012 Forced Tunneling into cyber end dragon+Unfortunate report=gg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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