Zexiontwo Posted July 4, 2012 Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 Hi, this is my first card, look it over and give me your opinion. This card can be Special Summoned by discarding one monster in your hand and banishing one card in your graveyard. Once per turn, you can banish one monster from your Graveyard to target one face-up monster on the field and reduce its ATK to 0. So, OP? UP? Broken? Unbroken? Hit me. I can take it. [attachment=34944:Marluxia.png] Edit: ATK is now 2000, but it won't let me upload a new picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexiontwo Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 Bump *sigh* Anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultiomos Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 The effect seems a little over powered compared to it's strength, so I'd suggest a slightly lowered attack, about 2000 maybe? Other than that I'd say it's pretty good, especially for your first card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexiontwo Posted July 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 Thank you, I'll fix that shortly. Thanks for your input! (Especially consideriing no one else commented) Also..... Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 13, 2012 Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 The first effect is like The Tricky. Like The Tricky, it shouldn't have too much ATK. The second effect is busted. It's very hard not to have spare monsters in the Graveyard and since this card is Level 5 it can be used to Overlay for the Rank 5 Chronomaly for ungodly power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexiontwo Posted July 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Wow, didn't know about Chronomally ^.^' Alright, changed it's effect. [attachment=34954:Marluxia.htm] Effect: This card can be Special Summoned by discarding one monster in your hand and banishing one card in your graveyard. Once per turn, you can banish one monster from your Graveyard to target one face-up monster on the field and halve it's attack until the end phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MK-ultra Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 its not a bad card by any means it's 2nd eff is just a little twonkey not that the attack is halfed i guess its fine but still just seems a little OP for me (cause its a bigger gale) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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