Element Protector Deck - Unfinished

[JaysonPender]

These Are The Beginning Cards Of My Element Protector Deck. These Cards Are Based On Superhumans With Element Powers To Protect People From Evil. Kinda Like Elemental Heroes But Mine Are Cooler. I Hope.

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3rd Class Aqua Protector
Lore: When this card is Normal or Flip Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "3rd Class Flame Protector" from your Deck or hand.

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3rd Class Flame Protector
Lore: When this card is Special Summoned, you can add 1 "Polymerization" from your Deck to your hand.

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2nd Class Steam Protector
Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Fusion Summoned, all Spell and Trap Cards your opponent controls are destroyed. For each destroyed, this card gains 200 Attack Points.

Tell Me What You Think. I'm A Beginner So Constructive Critism Would Be Nice.

[seattleite]

First of all don't use attachments. Click the card in the card maker and copy the code here.

First card makes an instant Rank 4 Xyz with its counterpart, so you probably want to mention "the summoned monster cannot be used as Xyz Material".

Otherwise the two cards are ok.

The Fusion monster is sort of useful. You'll probably want more fusion choices in case your opponent is running beatdown but it's not bad.

First sentence should be changed to "This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Fusion Summon." A Fusion Summon IS a Special Summon.

[Love of Ghibli]

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First of all don't use attachments. Click the card in the card maker and copy the code here.

First card makes an instant Rank 4 Xyz with its counterpart, so you probably want to mention "the summoned monster cannot be used as Xyz Material".

Otherwise the two cards are ok.

The Fusion monster is sort of useful. You'll probably want more fusion choices in case your opponent is running beatdown but it's not bad.

First sentence should be changed to "This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Fusion Summon." A Fusion Summon IS a Special Summon.
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You aren't going to mention that the fusion monster doesn't list it's fusion requirements lol.

That aside the set is fine nothing great and nothing awful about it. For the first card instead of adding a restriction just say you can only special summon from the hand. Special summoning straight fom the deck is a bit much lol