Double L productions present L's first card ~ Wind Dragoness ~

[Double L]

This is Double L's first card of my campaign, i hope you all really like it, i have put alot of effort into this card, please correct me on any OCG, grammar or picture errors a may have... besides that hope you enjoy. ^_^

[b][u]Wind Dragoness[/b][/u]
[IMG]http://i30.tinypic.com/33k6i5i.jpg[/IMG]

Link to picture= http://pamansazz.deviantart.com/art/Wind-Dragon-79059197

[kid]

pretty good :)

[Grayall]

not send directly, but discarded

on your side of the Field

this cards effect, not this card.

Not Life Points, but just attack directly.

7/10

[Yankee]

NICE PIC 0_0

Credit the artist, find his name, and put it as the cards edition, like, instad of limied edition, it's, Art by (Whover made it)

Nice effort on the card ^_^

[Double L]

Thankyou very much, i will post a disclaimer immediately Yankee. O_o

 

EDIT: does a link to the picture count as a disclaimer? If so then i have posted my disclaimer.

[Yankee]

I think a link is fine, so, good job.

Good luck with the rest of your cards man ^_^

[Luna Diviner]

Well the edited version looks pretty awesome 9/10

But I think it should be a wind attribute

[Yankee]

lol, just noticed that, it's a wind dragon, yet water attribute, lol

[Double L]

lol' date=' just noticed that, it's a wind dragon, yet water attribute, lol

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Damn, i messed up on the attribute, my bad. =/

 

I'm 100% sure that i put Wind attribute though. :p

 

I will edit that.

 

EDIT: I have put up the edited version of my card.

[Yankee]

ok, cool, it's nice to see a member that is willing to go back and edit his card, your gonna be cool man ^_^

[Guest Black Fang]

very nice, 10/10, though i thiink it could be a bit better o.o

[Yankee]

Wait, where is the logic, lol, 10/10, yet can be better? 0_o

Sry for spam....lol

[Double L]

Yankee i have edited my card, changed the card attribute and tinkered with the card effect a little, it may still have errors, but i have corrected the majority of them. ^_^

 

Thankyou very much for the help. :D

[Luna Diviner]

One error I see now, take the space between opponent and "s" of its oppenents not opponent s.

[Yankee]

Thank you very much L for the rep ^_^

And yeah, you got some work to do yet, but yeah, your gonna be great on this site if you continue to be a member like this ^_^

I look forward to seeing you post more cards soon.

Good luck ^_^

[Grayall]

And didnt noticed me, right?

[Double L]

Thanks again Yankee, i have the will to improve and move on from my errors. ^_^

I may post yet another card tonight.

 

And Grayall i did notice you, thanks very much for your advice, but i think that post was a little spamish. :p

 

Any more ratings?

[Yankee]

And didnt noticed me' date=' right?

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Oh, sry, lol

But yeah, thanks both ofyou for the reps, i'm happy you all think I did well ^_^

 

And , i'm glad you like to improve, if you do that, you will be the new God Kaze man, it only takes a lil bit of work, so, I m seeing you and Grayall as being great members ^_^

[Double L]

Ty once again Yankee and everybody else who has commented on my first card. ^_^

 

Anymore ratings?

[harhar]

wow for your first card this is great and the pics awesome great job dude

10/10:D

[shonenhikada]

I don't see any errors and the pic is great, but sadly the effect kinda sucks I can see this being a card just I won't be playing it. 9/10

[arpeejajo]

Excellent card. If you keep this up, you'll be amazing in the near future. The pic is amazing too. The errors were already mentioned.

8/10

[Double L]

Thankyou the two above me. ^_^

 

I'm glad you all like my card and I'm surprised its getting ratings this good, once again ty all. :D

[God of Cadillacs]

I like the picture.

[Ultima™]

8/10