Double L Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Constructive Criticism please, hope you like the second card of my campaign. ^_^ Link to image: http://cyzra.deviantart.com/art/Drow-Warrior-26593888 Armored Dusk Demon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Very nice job man ^_^The only thing I can see is that you say 200 "Points", don't say points, otherwise, Good job ^_^8.6/10EDIT: I see 1 last thing, you said, When this card is Summoned you may....Don't forget the comma, so,When this card is Summond, you may... ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Double L Posted March 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Thanks Yankee, I'm going to edit my card later to make the OCG perfect, I'm a perfectionist, lol. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Are you playing Heroes or Warcraft? Name is like one char from Lineage 2.This cards effect, not this card or this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Yeh points = NOCool card but why make a new type ?Very nice man, I sense great skill dwelling within you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 great job again:Di just have 1 question why does it say warrior editionbut other then that 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Yeah, Warrior Edition is a little bir dumb, and picture a little bit unsized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Double L Posted March 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 great job again:Di just have 1 question why does it say warrior editionbut other then that 8.7/10 Um, that was a mistake, I'll change that immediately, my bad. :) Thankyou all for rating my card. ^_^ EDIT: i have edited my card, removed the Warrior edition thing and changed the OCG a little. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Your welcome m8.You are becoming very good a few errors here and their but they are only minor and I probably make them aswell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Nice, now that it is edited, it's awsome, i am confused on the warrior EDITION thing though, but still, good work ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Double L Posted March 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 I have edited my card now, tis near perfect in my eyes. :D Thankyou very much for all your help; Yankee, MCR... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 There we go, it's awsome man, good work, you are a great card maker ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Double L Posted March 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Once again ty Yankee, I'm going to post my 3rd card soon, maybe not today though. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Oh man, I can't wait to see your new card.This is nearly as exciting as opening a pack and finding everycard you got was ultra rare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Dang man, your a good card maker, I can't wait to see your next card, you have fans ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Quite simply overpowered. The fact that it's a 2000 4-star beatstick means Gene-Warped Warwolf is out of the job. Not only that, but you can up its ATK by 200, higher than that of Cyber Dragons! There is also the problem that he's a 4-star warrior, meaning he's searchable via Reinforcements, making him even more overpowered. The effect also lacks originality. There's a quick-play spell with the same effect. Anyway, this is my recommende change: Dark/Warrior/4/1600/1600When this card is Normal Summond or Special Summoned, select and activate 1 of the following effects until the end of turn:- Attacking monster you control gain 300 ATK - Defense Position monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. or something like that. Don't take the effect of a spell card and turn it into a monster, mix things up a bit or try something new. I hope this helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 I like that card. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Great job, I can see you becoming a good card maker :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 not too bad. a bit overpowered and not too origional but i give it a 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 pretty good, nice job :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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