lennon7441 Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 done please tell me what i need to do to inprove [IMG]http://i48.tinypic.com/34dhlk1.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/osubup.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/ab3z28.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/dmbgwo.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/2pozmer.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/2nvypms.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/2pys01j.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i50.tinypic.com/qyxv6h.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/6giiqg.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/2ujqzaq.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted July 9, 2012 Report Share Posted July 9, 2012 Most of your cards are Force-users, yet they do not have any Effects? I would advise that you try to at least spell the characters' names correctly, and capitalize appropriately. You have also assigned them inappropriate ATK and DEF stats. Please try again. To wit: 1. C-3P0 or See-Threepio: No Level-1 monster is going to have 6000 DEF. That's more like a Level-12 stat. Threepio is a protocol droid, so if you gave him an effect he might be able to stop a monster of a different archetype from attacking or using its effect. 2. Chewbacca: Way too powerful for a Level-6, with his ATK the same as a Blue-Eyes White Dragon, and his DEF more powerful. He's a Wookie. He's armed with a bowcaster. Please get your facts straight so Chewie does not rip your arms out of their sockets. 3. Darth Sidious/ Palpatine: What is his ATK/DEF? What about his Force powers? 4. Darth Vader / Anakin Skywalker: His DEF is way too high. What about his Force powers? 5. Droid Army: Why is its DEF so high? Why is its ATK so low when it's 'powerful?' 6. General Kota: So you like strong DEF, good for you. But still overpowered and thus overruled. I would also be interested in hearing why Kota gets a card while the others in the story do not, even Starkiller, who is the star of that story arc. Force abilities? 7. Luke Skywalker: Not only is his ATK overpowered, but it also does not reflect his more defensive battle style. Again, where are his massively-powerful Force abilities? 8. Obi-Wan Kenobi: His stats are the same as Luke's, but he's got a lower Level. Why? Where are his Force powers? 9. R2-D2 / Artoo: Same problem as with Threepio. It's even a very similar card, not reflecting Artoo's abilities as a data slicer or astromech droid. 10. Jedi Master Yoda: As he stands he does not have any ATK, DEF, or effect, yet he is high-level. How do you rationalize this? Summary: Your cards need a lot of work. Please do not give up: you can do this, with additional effort. If you are ever stuck, search for a [i]Star Wars[/i] wiki (like Wookiepedia, not Wikipedia). It will give you the information you need so you don't repeat the same mistakes. It will also give you some ideas for the monsters' effects. May the Force be with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanPark24 Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 These cards are absolutely horrific *shudders* And Rahm Kota wasn't part of the Saga... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vipermatt96 Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 No offence but what a loaf of rubbish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
james388 Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 I thought that the cards were all really super powerful, and yes, they are mostly all force users, yet they have no effect. What is this? Seriously! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 Maybe he would get some better ideas if he looked at my "Star Wars Legacy" sets. They focus on the starfighters, but they still include a good number of Jedi and Sith. I've already done the research for those cards, so others shouldn't have to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 25, 2012 Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 [quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1341801919' post='5971279'] Most of your cards are Force-users, yet they do not have any Effects? I would advise that you try to at least spell the characters' names correctly, and capitalize appropriately. You have also assigned them inappropriate ATK and DEF stats. Please try again. To wit: 3. Darth Sidious/ Palpatine: What is his ATK/DEF? What about his Force powers? 10. Jedi Master Yoda: As he stands he does not have any ATK, DEF, or effect, yet he is high-leve How do you rationalize this? [/quote] When an ATK or DEF says "X000", it's saying that they have the same effect as Slyther. They have 1000 ATK and DEF for each card in your hand. I hope this helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted July 25, 2012 Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 We all wish it could be that simple, but no. That effect is included on Slifer's card, whereas these cards do not have effects at all. While creating cards here, I have learned that if you do not adequately define an effect on a card it does not exist, or function properly. As they stand, cards with 'X000' or 'XXXX' have stats equal to '0.' What lennon7441 has done is to create extremely unrealistic beatsticks, some of which are difficult to even summon. These cards need a [i]lot[/i] of work before I, at the least, can consider them playable. The kicker is that of my cards the lowest-level one with the closest stats to these cards is this one: [spoiler=Mandalorian Bes'uliik Heavy Fighter] [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v128/B-Nuts/Star%20Wars%20Legacy%20-%20Alliance%20Set/SWL305besuliik.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] This Mandalorian beauty is still a Level-8 monster. And by the way, Mandalore doesn't export the better version (optimum stats and [i]beskar[/i] armour plating). This version is supposed to take over for X-wings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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