FIRE Xyz

[JordanPark24]

[center][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/41597.jpg[/img]

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[center][color=#ffffff][background=rgb(0, 0, 0)]3 Level 4 monsters[/background][/color][/center]

[center][color=#ffffff][font=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(0, 0, 0)]This card gains 500 ATK for every FIRE monster you control. You can send 1 face-up FIRE monster you control to select 1 card on the field: Destroy it. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to select 1 FIRE monster you control; Double its ATK and DEF. Destroy it during the End Phase. Then, each player takes damage equal to its original ATK.[/spoiler][/background][/size][/font][/color][/center]

Opinions? Probably way overpowered, but yeah...

[Durandamon]

The problem is that there is no "Once per turn" clause. You could just go:

Xyz Summon > Detach 2 Materials to quadruple attack of himself, 10000ATK > attack > on MP2, use eff send to grave and destroy 1 card, take no damage.

Way too op'd without once per turn. Also, make the doubled monster unable to attack directly, or something.

[JordanPark24]

[quote name='Damage Inc.' timestamp='1341731654' post='5970390']
The problem is that there is no "Once per turn" clause. You could just go:

Xyz Summon > Detach 2 Materials to quadruple attack of himself, 10000ATK > attack > on MP2, use eff send to grave and destroy 1 card, take no damage.

Way too op'd without once per turn. Also, make the doubled monster unable to attack directly, or something.
[/quote]

It does say "Once per turn..."

[david ice]

Do my eyes deceive me ''8'' level 4 monsters how do you get 8 monsters on the field?, maybe you mean 4 level 8 monsters
Also ''send 1 face-up fire monster you control'' to where will you send it, i think you missed the ''send to the graveyard'' part, fix your card but i can see what your are trying to say. The effect like damage said you did not state the number of time you can use the effect
pic-6/10
eff-2/10 cause of mistakes
balance-3/10

overall-3/10

[LC]

[quote name='david ice' timestamp='1341852289' post='5971897']
Do my eyes deceive me ''8'' level 4 monsters how do you get 8 monsters on the field?, maybe you mean 4 level 8 monsters
Also ''send 1 face-up fire monster you control'' to where will you send it, i think you missed the ''send to the graveyard'' part, fix your card but i can see what your are trying to say. The effect like damage said you did not state the number of time you can use the effect
pic-6/10
eff-2/10 cause of mistakes
balance-3/10

overall-3/10
[/quote]

If you read the lore it says 3. YuGiCo makes it so that 3's appear to be 8's.

As for the card it's a 3000 beater when you summon it which turns into a 6000 beater via it's eff which right there is undoubtebly OP'd. Also like Damage said it can destroy itself so no damage is applied to either player or perhaps once you're done using it, you'll just let it be and drain your opponent and yourself of another 2500, which by then the duel will most likely be over. In the end it's OP'd even with the once per turns. Lowering the ATK and editing the effect a bit could help.

[JordanPark24]

[quote name='david ice' timestamp='1341852289' post='5971897']
Do my eyes deceive me ''8'' level 4 monsters how do you get 8 monsters on the field?, maybe you mean 4 level 8 monsters
Also ''send 1 face-up fire monster you control'' to where will you send it, i think you missed the ''send to the graveyard'' part, fix your card but i can see what your are trying to say. The effect like damage said you did not state the number of time you can use the effect
pic-6/10
eff-2/10 cause of mistakes
balance-3/10

overall-3/10
[/quote]

Attention! This card was made using Yugico.com. Because of the font they use, "3" looks like an "8." It's definitely a "3" on this card. And yeah, thanks for pointing out the error

[quote name='david ice' timestamp='1341852289' post='5971897']
Do my eyes deceive me ''8'' level 4 monsters how do you get 8 monsters on the field?, maybe you mean 4 level 8 monsters
Also ''send 1 face-up fire monster you control'' to where will you send it, i think you missed the ''send to the graveyard'' part, fix your card but i can see what your are trying to say. The effect like damage said you did not state the number of time you can use the effect
pic-6/10
eff-2/10 cause of mistakes
balance-3/10

overall-3/10
[/quote]

Attention! This card was made using Yugico.com. Because of the font they use, "3" looks like an "8." It's definitely a "3" on this card. And yeah, thanks for pointing out the error

[Durandamon]

I'm sure it didn't say Once Per Turn before, you should have just said "k I'll add it"

[JordanPark24]

[quote name='Damage Inc.' timestamp='1341869157' post='5972250']
I'm sure it didn't say Once Per Turn before, you should have just said "k I'll add it"
[/quote]

I didn't add it. It always had the "Once per turn." I made this card a few months ago and posted it on another forum. I just now posted it here, and nothing was changed.

[qazwater]

ok 8 monsters?Then no once per turn ok so brooking and impossible to play....