Shadow1209 Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/x3J2W.jpg[/img] Of course im working on the ritual for this card,but LOOK AT THIS THING! ALL YOU NEED IS FIVE CARDS ON THE FIELD AS A TRIBUTE FOR ONE CARD! THATS A LOW PRICE! lol. so anyways hope you like it and if you think of ideas i can do for the future, that would be great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 >Pic for Super Polymerization. >Divine Beast without any relation to Slifer, Obelisk, Ra or Horahkty. >X000 is not a legal ATK value. >Card effect/flavor text makes no sense. 0/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RageQuit 2.0 Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Wow...... just wow..... The Grammar is terrible, and you just added a pic of Super Polymerization onto a ritual background and call it a good card..... LOLOLOLOL Ok, first of all, it should say:(Delete the first line) This card can only be Ritual Summoned by (Name of Ritual Spell). You must also Tribute 5 monsters from either side of the field (your writing is terrible but i will assume that you want the tributes to be either side of the field). All monsters on the field are unaffected by Spell, Trap, and Monster effects (I have no idea if this is what you meant but that is a terrible idea). This card gains 2000 ATK for every card in your hand (change the grammar to this, and i will be honest, this is the only part that makes sense to me, minus the "to this ....light?). The last line is ridiculous and you should just delete it completely. Now to the actual card: You need 5 monsters to summon this card, and it has to be on the field. That's a hard summoning condition..... O wait, you can just tribute scapegoat tokens. This card is unaffected by spell, trap, and monster effects. Typical effect of all powerful cards that are made here on YCM by beginners. (YES I KNOW THAT I AM A BEGINNER). The last effect is decent. Have nothing to say about that part. Grammar: 0/10 Effects: 1/10 Other: 1/10 Overall: .314/10 Terrible... Just Terrible Tip: Next time, the thing should say [Ritual/ Divine Beast/ Effect] I'd rather just stick this in defense position and stall the heck out of my opponent. Tip: Is there a card making tutorial around here because you really need to look at one. I know that you are new and i am new also, but even I can see that this card is just outright terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Infin[u][i][b]i[/b][/i][/u]te? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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