Eternal Archetype

[Lunar Origins]

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[center][quote]2 Level 4 FIRE monsters[/center]
[center]When this card would be removed from the field and sent to the Graveyard or banished, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead. If there is a face-up "Eternal Hourai Princess" on the field, this card gains 600 ATK.[/quote][/center]

[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/eKOPN.jpg[/img][/center]

[center][quote]2 Level 4 monsters[/center]
[center]If this card would be removed from the field and sent to the Graveyard or banished: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead. Once per turn: You can Special Summon 1 "Rabbit Token" (Beast-type/LIGHT/Level 4/ATK 600/DEF 600) in Attack position to your side of the field. You opponent can only select "Rabbit Tokens" on your side of the field as attack targets.[/quote][/center]

[center]Gonna add more into this later, expanding into a FIRE/LIGHT archetype.[/center]

[Alpakha]

I like them but there are problems xP (all for second card)
1.Grammar problems, ur missing a few spaces (on the card not quote).
2. The tokens have no levels...

Otherwise, the cards look fine

[Lunar Origins]

The tokens have levels on the updated lore in the quotes, in which eveything is fixed.

BUMP.

[Synchronized]

Based on the way it's worded, could I technically use one as a Tribute for the Tribute Summon of a monster and detach a material to keep it on the field?

[Lunar Origins]

I hadn't thought of that, but I'm going to go ahead and say no.