Two Completely Random Xyz Supports

[Riktus]

[center][font=comic sans ms,cursive]Hi everyone, so my intention with this two card were provide some support for Xyz monsters (dont ask me why i just felt like it) but something in me says that they do more damage to a Xyz Monster than good, but ill let you decide that.[/font][/center]

[center][font=comic sans ms,cursive]So, the main idea of this two cards is basically gain benefits from detaching Xyz materials.[/font][/center]


[img]http://i.imgur.com/LppWe.jpg[/img]

[font=comic sans ms,cursive][b]Lore:[/b][/font] [color=#800080]When a Face-up Xyz Monster has any number of Xyz Materials detached from him, you can Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard or Deck whose Level is equal or lower the number of detached Xyz Materials plus 3.[/color]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/e6GPS.jpg[/img]

[font=comic sans ms,cursive][b]Lore: [/b][/font][color=#800080]Select 1 Face-up Xyz Monster on the field, that monster has all its Xyz Materials detached and gains ATK and DEF equal the amount of detached Xyz Materials x 500.[/color]

[Enma Ai]

I'm a bit confused the the first cards effect, so I can't really say much on it. The 2nd however is a bit interesting, basically powers up an xyz by 1000 in return for not getting its effects.. It can be OP'd sometimes, but most Xyz cards are useless without there materials and are quickly gotten rid of. I would only use it in an emergency (eg. power up Utopia to 3500, knowing next turn he'll get targetted and destroyed anyway).

I can also see it as a way to power up Leviathan Dragon straight away instead of over 2 turns. It seems balanced, but not something that would see mainstream use.

[Alpakha]

1rst card: I like it, adds swarm. Although, in the card you put "him" instead of it... that's sexist and bad grammar (yes a guy can use the word sexist)
2nd card: 2-3 words....i think... Gemknight Pearl............still unsure if card is balanced are not though

p.s. the pics are....like....mega epic......yeh

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

i would use guidiance on number17 and 30 plus gem knight pearl

booya now i know freaking why 30 ? just clear your opponent field except 1 monster plus 1 or more monster beside 30 on your field use guidenace on 30 boost his atk to 4000 attack his last monster then just more direct attack have something set or ready to get rid of 30 by your opponent stanby or your next turn

lol

syndrome you have number39 with 2 xyz material use syndrome on it you can special summmon 1 level 5 or lower monster from your graveyard or deck

why 2 xyz material plus 3 = 5

[Zelfore]

1st Card - OCG Fix: [sub][sup][i]When a face-up Xyz Monster has any number of Xyz Materials detached from it, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard or deck whose Level is equal to or lower than the number of detached Xyz Materials, +3.[/i][/sup][/sub]
Otherwise, not bad. Thankfully it's not a continuous.

2nd Card - Add an "Until the End Phase", and we're all good!
A permanent amount of attack makes Leviathan's effect pointless.

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

[quote name='Zelfore' timestamp='1342077162' post='5975175']
2nd Card - Add an "Until the End Phase", and we're all good!
A permanent amount of attack makes Leviathan's effect pointless.
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no way giving up their effects for a temp boost no

17 effect is delayed but this would speed it but if any thing would help 17 more

[Zelfore]

[quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1342077461' post='5975179']
no way giving up their effects for a temp boost no

17 effect is delayed but this would speed it but if any thing would help 17 more
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I feel like it needs [i]some[/i] deterrent from being used recklessly.
Maybe change it to x 400 boost instead. Atleast then it'd have some draw back from your usual Xyz Material pawning.

Just my opinion, meh! Not like it'd work too often if the player doesn't have it on-hand.

[Synchronized]

The first card is inherently broken. The fact of the matter is, it's [i]extremely[/i] abuseable. Allow me to explain why, using HEROes as a reference.

In a HERO build, you simply go Blade Armor Ninja, using, say Neos Alius and Bubbleman. With your Trap there, you can then detach a single material, allowing Blade Armor Ninja 2 attacks for the turn, followed by the ability to Special Summon Elemental HERO Stratos from the Deck, and attack for tons of damage. It's basically a Deck-wide RotA for any Level 4 or lower monster at the very least, which is bad card design. I'm not even sure how to balance it, really, because the ability to tutor any monster from 1-6 with ease is not necessarily fixable.

The second card isn't bad; it's like a somewhat more useful version of Xyz Effect or whatever that one is that increases ATK points. Perhaps it might be better suited as a Quick-Play Spell, to at least bait the opponent into attacking. Otherwise, it's only useful with non-Effect Monsters like Gem-Knight Pearl. As a Quick-Play, you can also use it in response to your opponent's Xyz Monster's Summon, to get rid of its materials before it can do much of anything, like a Forbidden Chalice of sorts that offers you the ability to swing for more damage at the same time.