MK-ultra Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/q9Ew6.jpg[/img] ok so i made this card just toi make a connor kennaway card fell like the eff might b alittle broken and some of the wording might be borked any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 16, 2012 Report Share Posted July 16, 2012 The effect is sorta hard to read. Post the text, and I'll look over it. First, though, is it Kennaway or Kenway? I'm not too familiar with this latest Assassin's Creed, but you have Kennaway in your post and Kenway on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MK-ultra Posted July 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 [quote name='Nu-Mou Knight' timestamp='1342403887' post='5979498'] The effect is sorta hard to read. Post the text, and I'll look over it. First, though, is it Kennaway or Kenway? I'm not too familiar with this latest Assassin's Creed, but you have Kennaway in your post and Kenway on the card. [/quote] its kenaway my bad on that and here is the eff You can return 1 face-up monster you control to the hand to Special Summon this card from your hand. at the start of the battle phase, if youre opponent controls more monsters than you,If this card destroyed your opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row. this effext can only be activated once per turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 17, 2012 Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 Returning any 1 monster is too little of a cost for a card like this. You could have him return to the hand if you SS him by that effect, as an idea. I think you got a little too choppy when you came up with the second effect. If you don't mind, I'll point out how to straighten it out: If your opponent controls more monsters than you at the start of [b]your[/b] [b]B[/b]attle [b]P[/b]hase, if this card destroy[b]s[/b] an opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again [b]during the same Battle Phase[/b]." Since you already said "[b]Once[/b] again", you don't need to say "Once per turn" again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MK-ultra Posted July 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 [quote name='Nu-Mou Knight' timestamp='1342491690' post='5980491'] Returning any 1 monster is too little of a cost for a card like this. You could have him return to the hand if you SS him by that effect, as an idea. I think you got a little too choppy when you came up with the second effect. If you don't mind, I'll point out how to straighten it out: If your opponent controls more monsters than you at the start of [b]your[/b] [b]B[/b]attle [b]P[/b]hase, if this card destroy[b]s[/b] an opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again [b]during the same Battle Phase[/b]." Since you already said "[b]Once[/b] again", you don't need to say "Once per turn" again. [/quote] ok thx that eff is just odd how i worded it and i was trying to avoid breaking it by makeing it able to take out neerly ure opponents entire feild Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 17, 2012 Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 [quote name='MK-ultra' timestamp='1342492869' post='5980510'] ok thx that eff is just odd how i worded it and i was trying to avoid breaking it by makeing it able to take out neerly ure opponents entire feild [/quote] Okay, that makes sense. The SSing effect was just a bit too little of a cost, as I said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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