stikstik001 Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Okay, ive tooken to your feed back and I made some Changes, and made a few new cards for you to judge, if there is one card in piticular that needs attention, please tell me. And i improved the OGC a bit. Enjoy (note the MAIN reason im posting these constantly is to make sure my cards are correct so that when i post them on the COMPLETE cards/sets forum I wont get bugged with OGC error comments. I also plan to Holo them, but before that I need to make sure they are good so i wont have to do it over and over agian when i find a different error.) and forgive my UPDATE BUMP, idk if that is agianst forum rules or not, i didnt see any rules agianst bumping. So here ya go, 20 cards so far, tell me what you think and please be constructive, no #/10 ad nothing else please, be constructive, I want to get better. UPDATE!!!! WOOOO IM GETTING HELLA BETTER xP i think.... I am now known as STIKSTIK the master of beast cards (note in real life i have a awesome beast deck adn i love all my beast cards ^_^) This set is getting closer and closer to getting complete, give me input please. 27 cards so far Here is a second set that im working on as well Of coarse i take no credit for the WONDERFUL art of these cards. oh and keep in mind... i just started making cards this week, ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 ocg PROBLEMS. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stikstik001 Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 ocg PROBLEMS. 7/10 could you be more specific, how are they now? A little better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 8/10. I like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maspe Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 yeah this cards have a few problems but still good cards!!!!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 few errors but good try :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 ok here are some hints for you, Attack when talking about increasing or lowering it, is spelled like ATK, its Warrior-Type, and Beast-Type, not just beast, and when writing numbers in a card effect, right them in numerical form, 6, not six, ratibng as of right now6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 They have some problems, but good try ^_^Please keep trying ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 It ok 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stikstik001 Posted March 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 LARGE UPDATE, BUMP. (Forgive me if that was agianst the rules, fore i found no rules agianst bumping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stikstik001 Posted March 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Bumpity bumpity bump! LARGE UPDATE!!! (agian) hey at least im not posting multiple threads ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stikstik001 Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 i dont know why i dont get any more posts... it almost seems like people dont like to post on something that has been changed constantly, or has already been commented on... do you guys think i didnt make changes? BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 hm.....not bad. Although Kainachi's effect should be completely reworded, cuz it makes no sense. How about "Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap card. The selected card cannot be activated. If you activate this effect, this card cannot declare an attack this turn." That way, it gives the impression that you're attacking a set spell/trap card? 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aragorn14 Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 great cards dude :D i dont see much ocg errors in my opinion. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stikstik001 Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 hm.....not bad. Although Kainachi's effect should be completely reworded' date=' cuz it makes no sense. How about "Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap card. The selected card cannot be activated. If you activate this effect, this card cannot declare an attack this turn." That way, it gives the impression that you're attacking a set spell/trap card? 7/10[/quote'] I think the effect is quite understandable. they way you posted seems long and unessesary... unless thats the proper OCG. What be more simple than: "This card can attack set trap and spell cards."... OOOO wait! i get it, since spell and trap cards dont have DEF or ATK its a confusing statement that way... i get it, k thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 so far so good kepp up the good work 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Bad Pictures. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stikstik001 Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Bad Pictures. 9/10 I what way, i think they look preatty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 pics arent that great but still...good effort 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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