Jdrawer Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 I will be uploading one random card a day, plus any cards mentioned in the card text. I will be trying to make these as realistic as possible, so any constructive criticism, including OCG help, will be appreciated. In fact, I don't care if you guys go ahead and give me your own ideas! I hope you like them! 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TenshiNoTeze Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Try to use numerals (1, 2. 3...) instead of a or an And c'mon, its MEW it has to have a cooler effect then that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 [quote name='TenshiNoTeze' timestamp='1342669174' post='5982495'] Try to use numerals (1, 2. 3...) instead of a or an And c'mon, its MEW it has to have a cooler effect then that! [/quote] I know, I know. You think I'm cheating Mew. Especially for a 10 Star monster. But just wait until you see the Move Tutor- cards. Just you wait... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monteparnas Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 I really think those cards are overpowered. Mew is pretty tough, but balanced for me (I'm not a pro, so I can be very wrong on this). He will need 2 tributes to be normal summoned, that is ok. The problem begins with Newborn Mew. Sommoning something from your deck isn't something to be added careless. This card effectively makes you have 1-3 MORE Mews on your deck, and half of them can be summoned without tribute (no, I'm not considering Newborn Mew a tribute in this case). If you make him summon Mew just from your hand, them it will be a lot better. Tablet of Mew have the very same problem, but mostly because of Newborn Mew itself. Newborn Mew is the key here: if he can Special Summon Mew from the deck, all 3 will be overpowered. But even them I'm in doubt about Tablet. Maybe you could turn it into a Trap Card, that would probably fix the matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TenshiNoTeze Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 [quote name='Monteparnas' timestamp='1342709581' post='5982802'] I really think those cards are overpowered. Mew is pretty tough, but balanced for me (I'm not a pro, so I can be very wrong on this). He will need 2 tributes to be normal summoned, that is ok. The problem begins with Newborn Mew. Sommoning something from your deck isn't something to be added careless. This card effectively makes you have 1-3 MORE Mews on your deck, and half of them can be summoned without tribute (no, I'm not considering Newborn Mew a tribute in this case). If you make him summon Mew just from your hand, them it will be a lot better. Tablet of Mew have the very same problem, but mostly because of Newborn Mew itself. Newborn Mew is the key here: if he can Special Summon Mew from the deck, all 3 will be overpowered. But even them I'm in doubt about Tablet. Maybe you could turn it into a Trap Card, that would probably fix the matter. [/quote] As of now, it all balances out since Mew is very underpowered for it's level upcoming Move Tutor cards might change that however Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monteparnas Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Even being underpowered for its level, it is an easy 3000 DEF without using up your normal summon. Not that he will be of any other use, but being able to do this so easily while draining your deck (what is a great bonus) is too good. Also, as you said, Mew will be more powerful because of the support he can get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 I don't know whether to make "EGG EGG" level 1 or level 12 or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistery Hunter Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 I'd like to mention this: pokemon evolve, so I think they should act like "level monsters" and have those effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='Mistery Hunter' timestamp='1343073479' post='5986544'] I'd like to mention this: pokemon evolve, so I think they should act like "level monsters" and have those effects [/quote] I actually have some Pokemon that evolve (Caterpie into Metapod into Butterfree for example), while some don't ( I have Weedle evolving into Beedrill). I like LV cards, but I don't think I should clot up the title of Pokemon with LV and such. "Charizard" should be "Charizard", not "Starter Third Evolution Fire Flying Charizard". But thank you for your input. You'll see that this group of cards has a lot of growth in it as we get going. I've been working on these for 2 years and there's over 700 cards. I hope you like them, and continue to follow them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistery Hunter Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 Oh I will follow this topic don't worry. also, eevees effect: I think you mean an eeveelution not and. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorNiro Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 I suggest Fixing up your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 [quote name='Mistery Hunter' timestamp='1343124696' post='5987288'] Oh I will follow this topic don't worry. also, eevees effect: I think you mean an eeveelution not and. [/quote] Oh why thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted September 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2012 BUMP 5 more plus mentions to come tomorrow to make up for my abscence! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted October 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 [quote name='Monteparnas' timestamp='1342709581' post='5982802'] I really think those cards are overpowered. Mew is pretty tough, but balanced for me (I'm not a pro, so I can be very wrong on this). He will need 2 tributes to be normal summoned, that is ok. The problem begins with Newborn Mew. Sommoning something from your deck isn't something to be added careless. This card effectively makes you have 1-3 MORE Mews on your deck, and half of them can be summoned without tribute (no, I'm not considering Newborn Mew a tribute in this case). If you make him summon Mew just from your hand, them it will be a lot better. Tablet of Mew have the very same problem, but mostly because of Newborn Mew itself. Newborn Mew is the key here: if he can Special Summon Mew from the deck, all 3 will be overpowered. But even them I'm in doubt about Tablet. Maybe you could turn it into a Trap Card, that would probably fix the matter. [/quote] Thought about it, and you're right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted November 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2012 [quote name='Monteparnas' timestamp='1342709581' post='5982802'] I really think those cards are overpowered. Mew is pretty tough, but balanced for me (I'm not a pro, so I can be very wrong on this). He will need 2 tributes to be normal summoned, that is ok. The problem begins with Newborn Mew. Sommoning something from your deck isn't something to be added careless. This card effectively makes you have 1-3 MORE Mews on your deck, and half of them can be summoned without tribute (no, I'm not considering Newborn Mew a tribute in this case). If you make him summon Mew just from your hand, them it will be a lot better. Tablet of Mew have the very same problem, but mostly because of Newborn Mew itself. Newborn Mew is the key here: if he can Special Summon Mew from the deck, all 3 will be overpowered. But even them I'm in doubt about Tablet. Maybe you could turn it into a Trap Card, that would probably fix the matter. [/quote] Perhaps make Tablet of Mew a Spell card and increase the cost to keep the original effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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