Jdrawer Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 I will be uploading one random card a day, plus any cards mentioned in the card text. I will be trying to make these as realistic as possible, so any constructive criticism, including OCG help, will be appreciated. In fact, I don't care if you guys go ahead and give me your own ideas! I hope you like them! [img]http://i.imgur.com/Z33Ll.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/htUGg.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/An547.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/i0JCi.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/UrIKO.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/DNOmT.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/7NzqV.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/9oLOe.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/aBVJg.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/Mv6Q5.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/CZ8sF.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/iGdDN.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/AOxoP.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/vgJuU.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/LaOvw.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/VhBRO.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/58UtA.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/Zr3xl.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/B7GO3.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/rw8V8.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/uLG0L.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/1CcoE.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/6BLCN.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/h8Bz1.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/9D29N.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/7KpPs.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/yldYk.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/dmmPM.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/6rsy9.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/4ulX7.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/JrzsV.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/tJ2p0.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/gUtww.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/AhVyd.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/yvnuw.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/3QKi8.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/82bEC.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/9lmLK.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/42zXW.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/Br9GK.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TenshiNoTeze Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Alien Luigi Kirby should be: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Kirby" monster and 1 "Luigi" monster you control. Always cap Summoned, Tribute and the like If a card references itself its as "card" not as "monster" I dont see how Alien Luigi Kirby is worth it's Summoning requirements It's also generally frowned upon for a card picture to have words on it (Alien Kirby) Also, any particular reason they all start with "Alien"?I think you messed up while editing, all your cards show up as alien luigi kirby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 [quote name='TenshiNoTeze' timestamp='1342671653' post='5982522'] Alien Luigi Kirby should be: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 "Kirby" monster and 1 "Luigi" monster you control. Always cap Summoned, Tribute and the like If a card references itself its as "card" not as "monster" I dont see how Alien Luigi Kirby is worth it's Summoning requirements It's also generally frowned upon for a card picture to have words on it (Alien Kirby) Also, any particular reason they all start with "Alien"? I think you messed up while editing, all your cards show up as alien luigi kirby [/quote] Personally, I don't think that many of the Kirby masks from the SSB series are strong enough to require tributes, but I'm just trying to tie the game into the cards. However, a smart duelist can use the requirements, no matter how crippling, to his or her advantage. And the "Alien" thing? There's these cards, that work only for Aliens, so any alien cards generally have the word "alien" in their title, since there isn't an Alien subtype. And I just thought the site was bugging up; I know I put in different imageshack codes when inputing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TenshiNoTeze Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Something like that happened to me an hour or two ago, just try reputting the image codes and trying until it works, remember to preview before submitting to check Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 I thought it was just a problem with on my end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra Iron Man Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 Its ok i guess but ya gotta improve the pictures; there is a lot of useless background action Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='Hydra Iron Man' timestamp='1342909283' post='5984866'] Its ok i guess but ya gotta improve the pictures; there is a lot of useless background action [/quote] What, in your opinion, is bad about a lot of background action? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 If someone could find me a better picture for "DNA Splice Machine," that'd be greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TenshiNoTeze Posted July 25, 2012 Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 OCG overall pretty jacked but Balance seems good, and everythings coming over nice Hows this for DNA machine [may require some cropping] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/oot0d.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 That might work. Is it a jpeg or .jpg? And can you tell me the art source? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hermit Purple Posted July 25, 2012 Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 This is just me, but i feel like if you are going to make the transformation cards for the "Kirby" monsters, that they should be allowed to Special Summon themselves instead of just a Normal Summon and if you have a monster that requires 2 to summon it that it should at least be stronger than just a few points or the 2 other monsters should be weaker so that it would be a little more justified. This one is just my personal opinion but I feel that "Kirby" should be like Relinquished, except you choose 1 face-up monster your opponent's controls. You equip that monster to Kirby and get the effect of that monster instead of the ATK/DEF increase. P.S Warden Koopa - OCG Change - While this monster is face-up on the field, All monsters on the field have their effects negated, except "Warden Koopa". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 [quote name='MachinaGayhem' timestamp='1343242849' post='5988784'] This is just me, but i feel like if you are going to make the transformation cards for the "Kirby" monsters, that they should be allowed to Special Summon themselves instead of just a Normal Summon and if you have a monster that requires 2 to summon it that it should at least be stronger than just a few points or the 2 other monsters should be weaker so that it would be a little more justified. This one is just my personal opinion but I feel that "Kirby" should be like Relinquished, except you choose 1 face-up monster your opponent's controls. You equip that monster to Kirby and get the effect of that monster instead of the ATK/DEF increase. P.S Warden Koopa - OCG Change - While this monster is face-up on the field, All monsters on the field have their effects negated, except "Warden Koopa". [/quote] Thank you for your OCG help. I will consider your other suggestions as well. If Kirby was like Relinquished, who'd want to transform it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TenshiNoTeze Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 [quote name='Jdrawer' timestamp='1343240912' post='5988769'] That might work. Is it a jpeg or .jpg? And can you tell me the art source? [/quote] Arnt JPEG and jpg the same thing? If not it shows up as JPEG if I try to save it. The source is Blizzard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hermit Purple Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 [quote name='Jdrawer' timestamp='1343246541' post='5988841'] If Kirby was like Relinquished, who'd want to transform it? [/quote] Well it would kind of be the same thing but would just copy effects of monsters instead of getting ATK/DEF increases but i mean, you could try and make some transformations to make it a necessity or to make him better. Like you can make "Kirby" weaker and he can easily get off the field from an attack, but if you transform it he can stand a better chance or something like that. I also think that if there were simpler transformations, it would be easier to get them out as well. Ex. if there was a lets say "Fire Kirby" - This card can only be Special Summoned by returning 1 Kirby you control to the owner's hand and discarding 1 FIRE monster from your hand. *insert extra effect here*. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard you can Special Summon 1 "Kirby" from your hand. just a thought, you did ask who would want to transform it if it were like relinquished so there you go that would be my way of interpretation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 [quote name='MachinaGayhem' timestamp='1343264703' post='5988988'] Well it would kind of be the same thing but would just copy effects of monsters instead of getting ATK/DEF increases but i mean, you could try and make some transformations to make it a necessity or to make him better. Like you can make "Kirby" weaker and he can easily get off the field from an attack, but if you transform it he can stand a better chance or something like that. I also think that if there were simpler transformations, it would be easier to get them out as well. Ex. if there was a lets say "Fire Kirby" - This card can only be Special Summoned by returning 1 Kirby you control to the owner's hand and discarding 1 FIRE monster from your hand. *insert extra effect here*. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard you can Special Summon 1 "Kirby" from your hand. just a thought, you did ask who would want to transform it if it were like relinquished so there you go that would be my way of interpretation [/quote] That might just work...[quote name='TenshiNoTeze' timestamp='1343263229' post='5988979'] Arnt JPEG and jpg the same thing? If not it shows up as JPEG if I try to save it. The source is Blizzard [/quote] Thanks, brah.I just posted the Green Yoshi because I figured you guys didn't want to see the entire set of Yoshis.[quote name='MachinaGayhem' timestamp='1343264703' post='5988988'] Well it would kind of be the same thing but would just copy effects of monsters instead of getting ATK/DEF increases but i mean, you could try and make some transformations to make it a necessity or to make him better. Like you can make "Kirby" weaker and he can easily get off the field from an attack, but if you transform it he can stand a better chance or something like that. I also think that if there were simpler transformations, it would be easier to get them out as well. Ex. if there was a lets say "Fire Kirby" - This card can only be Special Summoned by returning 1 Kirby you control to the owner's hand and discarding 1 FIRE monster from your hand. *insert extra effect here*. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard you can Special Summon 1 "Kirby" from your hand. just a thought, you did ask who would want to transform it if it were like relinquished so there you go that would be my way of interpretation [/quote] What do you think about this: I add the original monster's base ATK with Kirby's base ATK, and add the original monster's base DEF with Kirby's base DEF, then give the new monster an effect based on its actual abilities! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hermit Purple Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 [quote name='Jdrawer' timestamp='1343276712' post='5989110'] What do you think about this: I add the original monster's base ATK with Kirby's base ATK, and add the original monster's base DEF with Kirby's base DEF, then give the new monster an effect based on its actual abilities! [/quote] That doesn't sound too bad, but keep in mind for that to be balanced, kirby should have lower ATK and the monster that gives him the original ATK boost should be fairly decent but not too powerful either. Also, just another though. I know that in Crystal Shards that kirby would lose his power forcibly if he took to many hits. Maybe the transformed version(s) of kirby should include the effect that if they are destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon the "Kirby" returned from the field to the owner's hand by this card's effect from your hand. (Going back on the ex. kirby i listed before). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 [quote name='MachinaGayhem' timestamp='1343331823' post='5989524'] That doesn't sound too bad, but keep in mind for that to be balanced, kirby should have lower ATK and the monster that gives him the original ATK boost should be fairly decent but not too powerful either. Also, just another though. I know that in Crystal Shards that kirby would lose his power forcibly if he took to many hits. Maybe the transformed version(s) of kirby should include the effect that if they are destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon the "Kirby" returned from the field to the owner's hand by this card's effect from your hand. (Going back on the ex. kirby i listed before). [/quote] I'd love to be able to do that, but the only Kirby game I've played is SSBM. I'd love to have played another Kirby game, but I have not been awarded that priviledge. I'm just trying to stick to what I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hermit Purple Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 [quote name='Jdrawer' timestamp='1343574848' post='5991802'] I'd love to be able to do that, but the only Kirby game I've played is SSBM. I'd love to have played another Kirby game, but I have not been awarded that priviledge. I'm just trying to stick to what I know. [/quote]Oh, well that's perfectly fine i find it good to go by what you know (i think it applies well to making cards that relate to anime, games, shows, etc so that when you progress in whatever category it may be, you can edit, add, or fix accordingly. (or create something entirely new and original with the new info acquired) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted July 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 [quote name='MachinaGayhem' timestamp='1343575134' post='5991805'] Oh, well that's perfectly fine i find it good to go by what you know (i think it applies well to making cards that relate to anime, games, shows, etc so that when you progress in whatever category it may be, you can edit, add, or fix accordingly. (or create something entirely new and original with the new info acquired) [/quote] Yeah, I do that all the time with my Mario cards, and even more with my Pokemon cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted August 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 Well I guess we're done unless I do some Ivysaur or Charizard cards...[quote name='TenshiNoTeze' timestamp='1343219841' post='5988502'] OCG overall pretty jacked but Balance seems good, and everythings coming over nice Hows this for DNA machine [may require some cropping] [img]http://i.imgur.com/oot0d.jpg[/img] [/quote] I like for it to be from an official Pokemon source, or even fanart of some Pokemon canon, but I'll use this for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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