first trap card

[gangster yo4]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/NvX8F.jpg[/img]
the name i know it sucks but it was all i could think of

[SumoBanana]

6/10
Card is too rare. Just try Rare next time.

Don't use Kazuki's name. Use your name.

And this year is 2012, not 1996.

I will redo the text for you before posh people start complaining:

When your opponent declares a direct attack, activate this card to negate the attack. Then inflict 1000 damage on your opponent and send his/her attacking monster to a random place in his/her deck.

Hope this helps!

Sumo

[Uchiha]

[quote name='SumoBanana' timestamp='1342766436' post='5983617']
6/10
Card is too rare. Just try Rare next time.

Don't use Kazuki's name. Use your name.

And this year is 2012, not 1996.

I will redo the text for you before posh people start complaining:

When your opponent declares a direct attack, activate this card to negate the attack. Then inflict 1000 damage on your opponent and send his/her attacking monster to a random place in his/her deck.

Hope this helps!

Sumo
[/quote]

You don't understand cards do you? Learn OCG before correcting someone else.

As for the effect it should be: When your opponent declares a direct attack, shuffle the attacking monster into the owner's Deck and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

[Doc.]

[quote name='SumoBanana' timestamp='1342766436' post='5983617']
6/10
Card is too rare. Just try Rare next time.

Don't use Kazuki's name. Use your name.

And this year is 2012, not 1996.

I will redo the text for you before posh people start complaining:

When your opponent declares a direct attack, activate this card to negate the attack. Then inflict 1000 damage on your opponent and send his/her attacking monster to a random place in his/her deck.

Hope this helps!

Sumo
[/quote]

This is realistic card section, in case you hadn't noticed.

[Gojira/Godzilla]

[quote name='SumoBanana' timestamp='1342766436' post='5983617']
6/10
Card is too rare. Just try Rare next time.

Don't use Kazuki's name. Use your name.

And this year is 2012, not 1996.

I will redo the text for you before posh people start complaining:

When your opponent declares a direct attack, activate this card to negate the attack. Then inflict 1000 damage on your opponent and send his/her attacking monster to a random place in his/her deck.

Hope this helps!

Sumo
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[color=#000000][b]If you are going to give useless advice, go somewhere else.[/b][/color]

[color=#000000][b]OT: A decent first trap.[/b][/color]
[color=#000000][b]Possible Lore:[/b][/color] Activate only when your opponent declares a direct attack, shuffle the attacking monster into the owner's Deck and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

[gangster yo4]

thnx for the help just worked out how to print thes so their realistic