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Lamenar, The Acidic Fiend


Tha Desruc

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This is my returning card xD
I am a vet member from 2007 under a different account, mostly because I want to start fresh.
I haven't kept up with the OCG or anything like that, so this card may contain a lot of Old OCG, please, forgive me for that.
I just wanna jump back into the community, so I figured I should make a card.


So, without further ado
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This card can only be special summoned by selecting 3 cards in your hand and adding them to your graveyard. This card can attack your opponent directly during the turn that is summoned. If the attack succeeds, this card's effect will inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each turn this card is on your field.

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I can't quite remember how to make spoilers, so if anyone could tell me, that'd be great.

Right, so don't be too hard on me xD

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[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][spoiIer][/spoiIer][/font][color=#ffffff]Don't just copypaste this[/color]

This card can do a fair amount of damage, but at the cost of 3 cards from your hand. That is an enormous cost for any card, even one with above-average ATK. This card is expensive and doesn't protect itself in any way. I don't think it's worth running.

Also, you need an activation timing for the 500 damage, like "during each End Phase" or "during your opponent's Standby Phase".

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The text should probably be: This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by sending three other cards in your hand to the Graveyard, and can not be Special Summoned other ways. The turn this card is summoned; it may attack your opponent directly. If this card attacks directly via its own effect; deal 500 points of damage to your opponent.

You'll probably want to check with someone else about the absolute specifics if your a perfectionist. Otherwise i would say its to big a cost for a card that will last one turn, with little effect.

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