gangster yo4 Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/pjsNS.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted July 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 please tell me if effect makes no sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oking cole Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 Cool id use it in my deck for sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted July 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 you can if you want i was gonna do the same thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerion Brightflame Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 It's kind of OP. I mean, it is a Level Based monster Reborn, for use every turn, and is completely splashable. Its a nice idea, but it could do with a cost, or soley resurect just one monster. Also, your OCG needs some work. the last part of the effect should be diffgerent, as there is no time limit, and banished cards dont go into the grave. I would advise looking at other examples that get good feedback, and then having another go. But don't get discourage no matter what people say. everyone has to start somewhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted July 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 thnx i appreciate the help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EpicBoss99 Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 [quote name='HiveNet' timestamp='1342827542' post='5984155'] It's kind of OP. I mean, it is a Level Based monster Reborn, for use every turn, and is completely splashable. Its a nice idea, but it could do with a cost, or soley resurect just one monster. Also, your OCG needs some work. the last part of the effect should be diffgerent, as there is no time limit, and banished cards dont go into the grave. I would advise looking at other examples that get good feedback, and then having another go. But don't get discourage no matter what people say. everyone has to start somewhere. [/quote] Pretty much what I was going to say, except there were some Grammar issues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted July 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 i kinda dont want to copy from monster reborn but i liked the idea of it so i came up with this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 [s]NJJESJNEFIOEFN THIS CARD SUKKKKS[/s].... i'm just kidding, i just did that cuz on my last post u said i was being harsh o.0. Now for real. It's not bad, but it needs something to balance it desperately. It's basically a monster reborn that can be used every turn. Also the wording is weird. {spoiler=Should probably look like this]Each turn you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Graveyard. If this card is not used at least twice banish this card...you can't banish cards to the graveyard. (this part would make the card useless, as it would get banished upon activation since u didn;t use its effect twice yet xP)[/spoiler] Anyways, that's an awesome pic and the concept is nice, but it needs work. Nice try though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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