The Justicar of Truth

[Aerion Brightflame]

I admit, it's my first attempt at making a card. So, it is probably terrible.

Logic behind it, i wanted to make a card that would help warrior decks stand up to Inzectors. Or anything that likes to spam destruction cards.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/xgZ1g.jpg[/img]

Effect: If this card is special summoned, Tribute 1 face up Warrior-Type monster you control. If this card would be destroyed; reduces this cards ATK and DEF by 600 instead. Once per turn, when this card destroys your opponents monster in battle, it can attack once again in a row.

Contstructive Critisim is very much welcome.

[Uchiha]

OCG needs some work.

Fixed Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up Warrior-Type monster you control. If this card would be destroyed, reduce the ATK and DEF of this card by 600 instead. Once per turn, if this card destroyed your opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row.

[Aerion Brightflame]

[quote name='Uchiha' timestamp='1342828883' post='5984194']
OCG needs some work.

Fixed Effect:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up Warrior-Type monster you control. If this card would be destroyed, reduce the ATK and DEF of this card by 600 instead. Once per turn, if this card destroyed your opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row.
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First part of the effect is the same clause as Tyrant Dragon. It can get normal summoned, but requires a tribute to be special summoned. And yeah, my grammer does need work, to used to longer versions.

[Uchiha]

[quote name='HiveNet' timestamp='1342829580' post='5984208']
First part of the effect is the same clause as Tyrant Dragon. It can get normal summoned, but requires a tribute to be special summoned. And yeah, my grammer does need work, to used to longer versions.
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In that case:
If this card is Special Summoned, Tribute 1 face-up Warrior-Type monster you control. If this card would be destroyed, reduce the ATK and DEF of this card by 600 instead. Once per turn, if this card destroyed your opponent's monster by battle, it can attack once again in a row.

[Aerion Brightflame]

The card has been edited. Feedback?

[·Toot]

What if you don't control another monster? It would have to destroy itself. Thats pretty pointless. Either add another drawback for it or state that it needs to destroy [i]another[/i] monster. Other than that it's pretty straight forward and pretty bland. Its not to bad, but not all that good. It could use a little something. Eh... 7/10

[Aerion Brightflame]

[quote name='Toot.' timestamp='1343357483' post='5989839']
What if you don't control another monster? It would have to destroy itself. Thats pretty pointless. Either add another drawback for it or state that it needs to destroy [i]another[/i] monster. Other than that it's pretty straight forward and pretty bland. Its not to bad, but not all that good. It could use a little something. Eh... 7/10
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That's the point... I made it so it isn't that easy to Special Summon, becuase under conventional cirsumstances its hard to shift. Seeing as it has 5 lives against destruction. I will however add (from the graveyard) to the special summoning effect.