Kuga_Tenreu Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 hey guys i'm new to his card maker fourm but i have had many years of card idea's, i hope you like them, also i specialized in low level cards so most of my card creations are going to be low level monster cards, one more thing i found the URL images on google so i take no credit for them. [img]http://i.imgur.com/v8TPY.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FUNE Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 Ok, artwork is rubish, search for some on Jazin Kay's arquive... OCG is really bad and you didn't capitalize nothin'... Other from that it is a nice effect... 4/10, by the originality.... Corrections: Name - Anoka - The Warrior of Chance Type - Fiend / Warrior (even do i think it should be only Warrior) Effect - [code]When this card attacks a monster on your opponent's side of the field both you and you're opponent roll a six-sided dice. If:[list] -Your opponent gets the higher result: Destroy this card and inflict 500 points of direct damage to your Life Points. -You get the higher result: Detroy the opponent's card and inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points. -Both results are equal: Both card cannot be destroyed by battle until the end of this turn (damage calculation is applied normally). [/code] My OCG isn't perfect, but this way is better than the original one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuga_Tenreu Posted July 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 whats wrong with the picture i happen to like it but i guess thats my opinion. thank you for the four stars you'll find all my cards are unique, and last don't you think that sounds abit wordy, the reader would have to buy giant grandma glasses to put all that on one card... here's my next card, hope you like it. edit: ok i tryed changing it but now it wont let me upload the card so i had to delete it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zer0 the shadowking Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 Its not that its rubbish its that its too big so its being distortioned and unproportionalized Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FUNE Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 Actually you just have to put the effect under the card, it is called LORE... and you have to start Capitalizing youre names, senteces and types of card... also, an advice: try reading youre yugioh cards for understending the grammar used yugioh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuga_Tenreu Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 lets try this again, also i looked at that guys webpage and most of his drawing are about women, i suppose i could use that angel one for my judgment card, another also i decided to add the year of when i thought of the card to show how old they are. [img]http://i.imgur.com/4E7Bm.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuga_Tenreu Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 ok how's this one, tomorrow i'll post spells and traps [img]http://i.imgur.com/NsX3v.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuga_Tenreu Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 here's the next one [img]http://i.imgur.com/tiPIE.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 You thought oh Kid Kiyu in 2003? When YuGiOh JUST CAME OUT? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuga_Tenreu Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 it was ether 2003 or 2004, i cant remember... and what are you talking about, Yogioh came out in 1996 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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