Mengerz Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/ELzcv.jpg[/img] Hey guys I'm going to start making some TMNT related cards and their will be heaps more! Follow me if intended! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kendrick sendersson ovak Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 9\10 the card is good but you should select better images for the next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira/Godzilla Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 [quote name='Mengerz' timestamp='1342878414' post='5984589'] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ELzcv.jpg[/img] Hey guys I'm going to start making some TMNT related cards and their will be heaps more! Follow me if intended! [/quote] [color=#000000][b]You need to edit the effect, because "Cannot be destroyed." is just terrible, Since its shredder, you might want to make it so that he can only be destroyed in battle by any of the ninja turtles, or master splinter. also, the Image is fine, Overall I'd say a solid 8/10.[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 I believe the words you are looking for are "This card cannot be destroyed by battle." That leaves card effects, by the way, and you still take damage to your Life Points -- although Shredder seems to be as powerful as "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" even though he has an effect. The picture is a bit on the dark side for my tastes. I'm sure you can find one without rain, and which does not include Ninja of the Foot Clan quite so prominently. Remind me: is an 'Utrom' one of those little aliens? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 [quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1342891195' post='5984691'] I believe the words you are looking for are "This card cannot be destroyed by battle." That leaves card effects, by the way, and you still take damage to your Life Points -- although Shredder seems to be as powerful as "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" even though he has an effect. The picture is a bit on the dark side for my tastes. I'm sure you can find one without rain, and which does not include Ninja of the Foot Clan quite so prominently. Remind me: is an 'Utrom' one of those little aliens? [/quote] I think the pic is great, also yes Ultroms are those squid llike aliens. For the card: not sure what to say, be more specific on the effect. It can't be destroyed by card effects (that would be great in todays format) or by battle (which would be close to useless as this card is 3000 atk)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Doc. Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 3000 beater that never leaves the field. I have dealt with stupider today, IRL too, but this... THIS... [i]Thing.... dare I call it a THING.[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3].[/size][/color][/font][quote name='kendrick sendersson ovak' timestamp='1342879547' post='5984595'] 9\10 the card is good but you should select better images for the next time. [/quote] [quote name='~shadow~' timestamp='1342886054' post='5984643'] [color=#000000][b]You need to edit the effect, because "Cannot be destroyed." is just terrible, Since its shredder, you might want to make it so that he can only be destroyed in battle by any of the ninja turtles, or master splinter. also, the Image is fine, Overall I'd say a solid 8/10.[/b][/color] [/quote] [quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1342891195' post='5984691'] I believe the words you are looking for are "This card cannot be destroyed by battle." That leaves card effects, by the way, and you still take damage to your Life Points -- although Shredder seems to be as powerful as "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" even though he has an effect. The picture is a bit on the dark side for my tastes. I'm sure you can find one without rain, and which does not include Ninja of the Foot Clan quite so prominently. Remind me: is an 'Utrom' one of those little aliens? [/quote] [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1342891770' post='5984698'] I think the pic is great, also yes Ultroms are those squid llike aliens. For the card: not sure what to say, be more specific on the effect. It can't be destroyed by card effects (that would be great in todays format) or by battle (which would be close to useless as this card is 3000 atk)? [/quote] [quote name='ウォーグレイモン' timestamp='1342914348' post='5984951'] 3000 beater that never leaves the field. I have dealt with stupider today, IRL too, but this... THIS... [i]Thing.... dare I call it a THING.[/i] [/quote] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Thx everyone for the tips and yeah I'll find time to get a better pic and originally i was goinna write 'This card cannot be destroyed by battle' but ive noticed how the newer cards get heaps more simplified on the text? aha so yeah i just decided to make the text quick and easy but i will add more detail to it. [/background][/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/c7gLv.jpg[/img] This is the new and improved version. Hope u like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='Mengerz' timestamp='1342937997' post='5985282'] [img]http://i.imgur.com/c7gLv.jpg[/img] This is the new and improved version. Hope u like it [/quote] Well....nice try, it seems overpowered (as it has to be banished, or returned to the hand/deck) but then again its a tribute monster. I'm not rlly sure what to say. P.S. i liked the old picture better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1342940942' post='5985299'] Well....nice try, it seems overpowered (as it has to be banished, or returned to the hand/deck) but then again its a tribute monster. I'm not rlly sure what to say. P.S. i liked the old picture better [/quote] ahah yeah thts cool i'll change it now i'll change the effect too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/0cJwW.jpg[/img] Here's a less overpowered version i guess. But should i keep the original pic or this one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 That's better, but you should probably say during what phase it's summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1342950844' post='5985357'] That's better, but you should probably say during what phase it's summon. [/quote] True but ill just make it tht it can be any phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='Mengerz' timestamp='1342951038' post='5985361'] True but ill just make it tht it can be any phase [/quote] If you do, say so ON the card. Also, you still made no attempt at the OCG. If you don't know how to do it, use this [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1342972837' post='5985528'] If you do, say so ON the card. Also, you still made no attempt at the OCG. If you don't know how to do it, use this [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/"]http://forum.yugiohc...ntation-thread/[/url] [/quote] thx for tht, but can u maybe tell me what i spelt or wrote wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='Mengerz' timestamp='1343028180' post='5986200'] thx for tht, but can u maybe tell me what i spelt or wrote wrong? [/quote] I'm not going to do that, u have to learn how to do OCG on ur own..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1343029511' post='5986205'] I'm not going to do that, u have to learn how to do OCG on ur own..... [/quote] lol fair enough its just tht i thought the text i wrote doesn't rly have mistakes? unless ur talking about the line, 'If this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle' lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='Mengerz' timestamp='1343035176' post='5986233'] lol fair enough its just tht i thought the text i wrote doesn't rly have mistakes? unless ur talking about the line, 'If this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle' lol [/quote] whoops, didn't see the updated one; it looks fine to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1343035372' post='5986234'] whoops, didn't see the updated one; it looks fine to me! [/quote] lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 I like the new picture better, so to each his or her own. And yes, blanket effect immunity is considered overpowered by many, so the change is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mengerz Posted July 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 [quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1343074323' post='5986553'] I like the new picture better, so to each his or her own. And yes, blanket effect immunity is considered overpowered by many, so the change is better. [/quote] yeah truee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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