charlie1989 Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 Hey there! I made an Archeotype based on the Marvel's superheroes hope you like. this is my first post (PD my english is not perfect so i apologize for the grammar and the sintaxis i used, i'm mexican) This collection is the first version of the archeotype [img]http://i.imgur.com/YzGJh.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/tIc3K.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/XQjuA.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/9ldU5.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/kFbk1.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/XdRxw.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/lneoM.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/NQJJy.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/wrywi.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/oTRvk.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/AEcFi.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/BBwOF.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/32vim.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/bjZ2O.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/DwqyU.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/6H0jH.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/wWzMO.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/8USq6.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/RZZGr.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/m5Y9M.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/e8km3.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/hM4yc.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/jMLLQ.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/8V6Xh.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/1YtbL.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 0__0, to properly show the card do this: 1. Choose a card you want and click on it (the picture of the card). 2. A Url should appear under it, copy that. 3. Then paste that Url to ur topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charlie1989 Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 yes thanks i was made that a few minutes ago i looked for the solution but thanks for the info anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistery Hunter Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 Hmmm I'm bad at rating cards... But I think that the pictures are nice, I haven't seen the movie so I wouldn't know what monsters should be added and such, the effects look like the monsters, so overall rating... 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charlie1989 Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='Mistery Hunter' timestamp='1343072881' post='5986528'] Hmmm I'm bad at rating cards... But I think that the pictures are nice, I haven't seen the movie so I wouldn't know what monsters should be added and such, the effects look like the monsters, so overall rating... 7.5/10 [/quote] thanks for the rate and the pictures were made quick. I want to replace some images in the cards to look better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 Spellcheck is your friend -- and I'm too lazy to go through all the cards in a post to correct spelling and grammar these days. Here are some comments on your cards: 1. Adamantium Rage: I find it fascinating that any monster equipped with this card can gain the attacking monster's full ATK, which you see, to try to balance by having the equipped monster self-destruct afterward. 2. Avengers Alliance - Earth's Mightiest Heroes: I don't know whether to call it overpowered or underpowered, considering it is made with 4 "Avengers" monsters. That's quite an expense for a beatstick that does Piercing Damage, and which according to my understanding can attack all of the opponent's monsters that are on the Field in the same Battle Phase. 3. Avengers Alliance - Iron Man/War Machine: I'd like to point out that War Machine is also a full Avenger: he is on the Secret Avengers team at the moment. 4. Avengers Alliance - Old Soldiers: What, not effect? 5. Avengers Hero - Black Suit Spider-Man: Is it me, or does his picture make him look fat? Parker ought to be doing a better job with his shutterbuggery, if you know what I mean. It bothers me ever so slightly that you made Spider-Man an Insect-Type, when he is no more insect than anyone else, really (apparently everyone has a little insect DNA, according to one of the comics from the [i]Disassembled [/i]arc). Queen Bee was using it to control people. Spidey's stats seem a little underwhelming for a Level-7 monster. Oh yeah, and he is an Avenger. On two teams, even. 6. Avengers Hero - Amazing Spider-Man: Again, an Avenger. With Spidey you have your first Level-4 or lower monster, yet I wonder why he cannot be destroyed by battle against more powerful monsters. Ever. It makes sense for him to get a slight boost from teamwork, or even motivation from the Graveyard, In a way the latter makes sense, but don't overplay it: he has enough guilt already. 7. Avengers Hero - War Machine: Please do let me know which TCG monsters are Level-6 and have ATK as high as 2800. Thank you in advance. 8. Avengers Hero - Wolverine: Why the emphasis on DEF? Logan strikes me as the offensive type (and that's just his smell, by all reports). Cannot be destroyed by battle? Check. What about his tracking ability? Why a 'Beast-Warrior?' 9. Avengers Hero - Captain America, the First Avenger: Why is he a Level-8 with such underwhelming stats? I also doubt Ca would agree to the idea of him coming onto the Field with a sacrifice of any kinds. 10. Avengers Hero - Incredible Hulk: Again, why 'Beast-Warrior?' And does his ATK and DEF double every turn? Because that could get really, really bad. 11. Mjolnir: I can only see it as a quick-and-dirty Special Summon for Thor. Should that be necessary? The name also makes me want to ask: do you play 'Avengers Alliance' on Facebook? Because I used to. 12. Avengers Hero - Mighty Thor: Why can he and Hulk only be summoned if you have "Glibal Menace?" Also, a blanked effect immunity is overpowered, in my opinion. Thor is not immune to everything, even as he is now. 13. Global Menace: This is a Special Summoning card that lets you send cards hither than thither, and then sends the cards you used as cost back where they can be used? Overpowered, I think. 14. Heroic Sacrifice: The picture is in so much bad taste I don't know where to begin. I hope you realize that that's not a 'sacrifice' on Cap's part: he was assassinated. 15. Hulk SMASH!: Why half? 16. SHIELD Agent - Hawkeye: How does his Special Summon ability work? Clint is a Peak-Human Normal, not superpowered. 17. Nick Fury, Director of SHIELD: I laugh at the fact that every depiction these days is of the bald, African American version. Did you know that Nick Fury is a white man? This version is from the Ultimate Comics Universe. 18. Unibeam: '2000' what? And the Unibeam is an integrated ability of every armour since the Mk-II. It should be included in the Iron Man card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charlie1989 Posted July 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 [quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1343073862' post='5986549'] Spellcheck is your friend -- and I'm too lazy to go through all the cards in a post to correct spelling and grammar these days. Here are some comments on your cards: 1. Adamantium Rage: I find it fascinating that any monster equipped with this card can gain the attacking monster's full ATK, which you see, to try to balance by having the equipped monster self-destruct afterward. 2. Avengers Alliance - Earth's Mightiest Heroes: I don't know whether to call it overpowered or underpowered, considering it is made with 4 "Avengers" monsters. That's quite an expense for a beatstick that does Piercing Damage, and which according to my understanding can attack all of the opponent's monsters that are on the Field in the same Battle Phase. 3. Avengers Alliance - Iron Man/War Machine: I'd like to point out that War Machine is also a full Avenger: he is on the Secret Avengers team at the moment. 4. Avengers Alliance - Old Soldiers: What, not effect? 5. Avengers Hero - Black Suit Spider-Man: Is it me, or does his picture make him look fat? Parker ought to be doing a better job with his shutterbuggery, if you know what I mean. It bothers me ever so slightly that you made Spider-Man an Insect-Type, when he is no more insect than anyone else, really (apparently everyone has a little insect DNA, according to one of the comics from the [i]Disassembled [/i]arc). Queen Bee was using it to control people. Spidey's stats seem a little underwhelming for a Level-7 monster. Oh yeah, and he is an Avenger. On two teams, even. 6. Avengers Hero - Amazing Spider-Man: Again, an Avenger. With Spidey you have your first Level-4 or lower monster, yet I wonder why he cannot be destroyed by battle against more powerful monsters. Ever. It makes sense for him to get a slight boost from teamwork, or even motivation from the Graveyard, In a way the latter makes sense, but don't overplay it: he has enough guilt already. 7. Avengers Hero - War Machine: Please do let me know which TCG monsters are Level-6 and have ATK as high as 2800. Thank you in advance. 8. Avengers Hero - Wolverine: Why the emphasis on DEF? Logan strikes me as the offensive type (and that's just his smell, by all reports). Cannot be destroyed by battle? Check. What about his tracking ability? Why a 'Beast-Warrior?' 9. Avengers Hero - Captain America, the First Avenger: Why is he a Level-8 with such underwhelming stats? I also doubt Ca would agree to the idea of him coming onto the Field with a sacrifice of any kinds. 10. Avengers Hero - Incredible Hulk: Again, why 'Beast-Warrior?' And does his ATK and DEF double every turn? Because that could get really, really bad. 11. Mjolnir: I can only see it as a quick-and-dirty Special Summon for Thor. Should that be necessary? The name also makes me want to ask: do you play 'Avengers Alliance' on Facebook? Because I used to. 12. Avengers Hero - Mighty Thor: Why can he and Hulk only be summoned if you have "Glibal Menace?" Also, a blanked effect immunity is overpowered, in my opinion. Thor is not immune to everything, even as he is now. 13. Global Menace: This is a Special Summoning card that lets you send cards hither than thither, and then sends the cards you used as cost back where they can be used? Overpowered, I think. 14. Heroic Sacrifice: The picture is in so much bad taste I don't know where to begin. I hope you realize that that's not a 'sacrifice' on Cap's part: he was assassinated. 15. Hulk SMASH!: Why half? 16. SHIELD Agent - Hawkeye: How does his Special Summon ability work? Clint is a Peak-Human Normal, not superpowered. 17. Nick Fury, Director of SHIELD: I laugh at the fact that every depiction these days is of the bald, African American version. Did you know that Nick Fury is a white man? This version is from the Ultimate Comics Universe. 18. Unibeam: '2000' what? And the Unibeam is an integrated ability of every armour since the Mk-II. It should be included in the Iron Man card. [/quote] Ok, thanks for the review i also see your avengers decks earlier, and obviously i play yugi soo these effects will work fine for me but this is the first Beta I Made. I also want to tell you that, yes, Nick Fury were a white man and i see his own movie. and yes, I play MAA in the facebook. In the future i want to improve this cards and his images, so, again, thanks for the review and please forgive my bad english Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
james388 Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 Those are great cards. Looks like you put lots and lots of time into them. I would rate them 9/10. Some confused me, though. Why spiderman, he isn't an avenger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charlie1989 Posted July 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 [quote name='james388' timestamp='1343144401' post='5987617'] Those are great cards. Looks like you put lots and lots of time into them. I would rate them 9/10. Some confused me, though. Why spiderman, he isn't an avenger. [/quote] well, this avengers are based on the movie but in the comic if i remember well, spiderman joins the avengers later, but actually in the second revision of this deck i want to put spiderman as an Avenger Hero. Also There are cards for a properly playable style, so, you can summon Avengers Allys and Avengers Heros but if you read in some effects, there are many Avengers heros that cannot be summoned if there is another hero on the field, so, you could have thor, wolverine and spiderman on the field if you dont have the spell card. so that were the first reason i made spiderman an ally instead of hero. i am sorry for my bad english Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 Actually, james, Spider-Man is an Avenger. He's even on 2 teams currently, the main Avengers and the New Avengers, according to his own thoughts in one of the comics. He is also a member of the Future Foundation (current Fantastic Four), so he has become very much a team player. Similar to when the original Avengers team first assembled, the New Avengers came about in response to a breakout at a supervillain prison. The Avengers teams were reformed again after Norman Osborn got hoisted on his green petard, ending his 'Dark' Avengers. There is also a Secret Avengers team. I believe there are about 87 Marvel heroes who are, or have been, Avengers at one time or another in the entire history of the organization. That's pretty impressive. My Avengers sets include many members, but there are some I did not include, most of them dead or off the team, or with redundant powers. A wiki page should have the complete list. And charlie, you can stop apologizing for your English: it's fine. You'll improve over time through exposure and immersion with good English. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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