jcruler9999 Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 Here is my card: [img]http://i.imgur.com/wWVCK.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 DARK tuner + 1 or more non-tuner LIGHT monster(s) When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can pay 1500 Life Points to Special Summon one level 4 or lower DARK or LIGHT monster from your grave. Once per turn, you can activate one of these effects: Send one card from your side of the field to gain 500 Life Points. Pay 500 Life Points; Banish one card your opponent controls. Please help me fix it Also if anyone knows how to create bullet points on the lore please share Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Eloste Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 The card itself is pretty OK, but paying 1500 LP just to summon a level 4 or lower card is way too pricey. And I think you should add an effect where it is also treated as a LIGHT monster (similar to Light and Darkness Dragon) The multiple-choice effect's condition should be reversed (gain 500 LP with no condition whatsoever, and send 1 card you control to banish 1 card your opponent controls) To create the bullet point, press Alt + 7 on the keyboard. I'm not sure if it appears in the card or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcruler9999 Posted July 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 Oh yea whoops i meant to add that first this card is also treated as a LIGHt monster. As for the choice do you think that 500 is to little or the right amount? or should i just do something different for that one? Such as take the switching the effect to once per turn by paying 500 life points you can sp sum one level 4 or lower DARK or LIGHT monster from your grave and getting rid of the pay 1500 all together? Thanks for the help by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dubar Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 lol if he's a justice bringer id hate to see the bad guys man third effect is op because it has no drawbacks to it and the card overall is overpowered because of the atk this is BLS on roids bro drop atk down to like 2300 or something make the banishing effect have a drawback like not being able to atk after the effect is used or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jcruler9999 Posted July 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 well it isnt letting me edit the card on there so if anyone can help me please do so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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