WickedKing Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/uTVuz.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/IxNZS.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/P7BBc.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/5q0sq.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/KwIwk.jpg[/img] any thing could help an srry i didnt get a chance to fix the synchro im gunna start makeing synchros soon for angels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerion Brightflame Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 Ok, i shall run through them one card at a time: 1. Angel of Knight is fine. The OCG probably needs work, but i'm not good at it. 2. Azreil. It has to change. Honestly. Its a dark hole, that can't kill your own field, and packs a heavy storm in it as well. Its the definition of OP. Make it so it may destroy one card on the field instead, an anti Hornet. 3.Growing Wings. It's fine, takes a while for a significant attack boost. You need to put a time limit on. So, until the end phase or something like that. Also, ust normal grammer. Capitalize the start of a sentence, please. 4.Orifel... i'm unsure about... I kinda think its horrible, i kinda dont... 5. Gabriel. I say its fine, nothing horrid about it so long as you make the change to Azriel. 6. Gods hand. Again, fine. Its ditch an angel, for an angel. My only question with it is with Orifel its no cost... 7. Your tuner doesn't make sense with the archtype. It summons a level 4... which still cant tune for the synchro... I think you either make it level 4, or add some more level 2's. 8. I know people have already said about how the Synchro needs to change. If you do the once per turn, it will be better. Overall, pretty good for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loyalist Posted July 24, 2012 Report Share Posted July 24, 2012 Well the only real issues (as HiveNet said) is that Azreil needs to be balanced. Also Orifel's effect doesn't seem worth it as it counter acts your trap card "Growing wings". The last thing I would say is that there are a few monsters that already exist with "Angel" in their names. This isn't necessarily a bad thing as most monsters with angel in their names are LIGHT fairy types with the exception of the odd DARK attribute and some plant type angels. Some cards I would use with a deck based on this card type - Shining angel, Harvest angel of wisdom (If there are alot of counter traps) ect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WickedKing Posted July 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 ok i fixed the ones i think needed them any more commentsbump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 Azriel is a truly amazing card. Its LIGHT, its got a built-in King Tiger Wanghu, there would for SURE be decks that use it. Orifiel would probably be used with it, as a sort of stratos. Uriel is OP'd. Considering DMOC is banned (even though IMO it should not be) and it is a two tribute monster that just gets back a spell (not trap) having that packed in a 1800 ATK monster would be incredibly OP'd. Make it just a trap, then it is balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelfore Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 Azriel - "from the [b]field[/b] to the Graveyard;" Add that, and it'll be fine. Growing Wings - Weak support. It's lacking in originality, and proves there's no real [u]trick[/u] to these cards, they just sort of... battle... Orifiel - Yeah, alright. Not much to really say about this one. Uriel - It's basically or efficient Magician of Faith/Mask of Darkness... That's not a good thing. I can only recommend giving it a different effect entirely. Sabathiel - Pretty weak. Sure, it's an 2800 beater, but there are so many better options than this. When making an archtype, it's a good idea to know what you're [b]going [u]for[/u][/b], instead of what it [b]looks [u]like[/u][/b]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 [quote name='Zelfore' timestamp='1343274119' post='5989088'] Azriel - "from the [b]field[/b] to the Graveyard;" Add that, and it'll be fine. Growing Wings - Weak support. It's lacking in originality, and proves there's no real [u]trick[/u] to these cards, they just sort of... battle... Orifiel - Yeah, alright. Not much to really say about this one. Uriel - It's basically or efficient Magician of Faith/Mask of Darkness... That's not a good thing. I can only recommend giving it a different effect entirely. Sabathiel - Pretty weak. Sure, it's an 2800 beater, but there are so many better options than this. When making an archtype, it's a good idea to know what you're [b]going [u]for[/u][/b], instead of what it [b]looks [u]like[/u][/b]. [/quote] Listen, my anti-meta chaos stun would absolutely LOVE having x3 Azriel and x3 Orifiel, so idk what you are talking about. Although for Orifiel, I forgot to say, probably make it so it can't search itself, otherwise you have some 1800 atk gadget BS going on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WickedKing Posted July 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 [b] [url="../../user/358064-thekazu4u/"]thekazu4u[/url][/b] ok i got some more u might lik to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerion Brightflame Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 You've improved things a lot, but i still have a concern with Azriel. Becuase it says, sent to the grave, without specifying where from, it canbe used from your hand with a discard card, and then clear a decentish part of the field if used right. I would change it to being from the field instead. That way, it can't be used as horribly as it could now. still, well done. Look forward to see if you add anymore cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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