Drewer Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Hey guys, so here is my new card,hope ya all like it. =3 [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/n11Wz.jpg[/img][/center] [center][b][font=comic sans ms,cursive]Lore[/font][/b]: [font=georgia,serif]You can Special Summon this card (from your Hand) by revealing 3 Monster Cards from your Hand with different names. If this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, reveal the top 3 cards from your opponent's deck and return them to the top of the deck in any order. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; during your opponent's next Draw Phase, your opponent reveals the card he/she drew, if the card is of the same type than the card you discarted (Monster,Trap or Spell) send it to the bottom of the enemy deck and increase this card's ATK by 200.[/font][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 The second effect should probably say "Once per turn: You can discard 1 monster; During your opponent's next Draw Phase, your opponent reveals the card he/she drew, and if it is a monster with a Level lower than the Level of the monster you discarded, return the revealed card to the bottom of your opponent's Deck." If so, it's too situational to be good. Being able to Special Summon this card fairly easily (with 2 other monsters) is a nice draw, but it's underpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drewer Posted July 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Ok, thanks for your feedback, i tweaked her effect a little bit: - Now she gains 300 ATK if her effect is succefully activated. =) i guess she is better now, let me know what you think,plz. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 That still doesn't make much of a difference. Even if you stack your Deck with high-Level monsters, you're discarding a card for a 50% chance of a 1-for-1. Also, I was wrong about "during" being capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drewer Posted July 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Ok,thanks (again) newhat, i have reworked her eff, she can know check the top 3 cards from the opponent's deck, re-arraange them in any order and now you can return either Spells,Traps or Monsters. please,let me know what you think of the reworked eff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvernstorm Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 [quote name='Drewer' timestamp='1343460841' post='5990836'] Hey guys, so here is my new card,hope ya all like it. =3 [/quote] yup, i like the image...so smexy lol btw, there are some words that don't require capitalization Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Now it's not great, but it's OK. There's some kind of benefit to Summoning it over Cyber Dragon, and you can quickly dump Level Eater for Synchro buttnix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drewer Posted July 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 @Wyvernstorm Glad you liked. =) @Newhat Ok, thanks for the comments, you helped me a lot, i probably will leave her effect as it is right now, i was actually thinking about making an Archetype called Truth Seeker, but i probably won't be doing it. =/ well, thanks again for all the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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