Gaia Of Destruction Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 I Hope You guyz Like It!!! [attachment=35059:untitled.png] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 This card is not quite a perfect storm. Let's Count! , [color=#000080]1: You need to list Xyz/Synchro Materials. This is usually "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters", and stronger monsters may have other restrictions. You post it as the first line of text and then hit Return.[/color] [color=#000080]2: FIEND should not be in metacaps. Type it as "Fiend", not "FIEND".[/color] 3: The first effect of this card will make it banish itself, making its other effects moot. Did you mean "all other cards on the field"? 4: You don't need to specify that this card can "only stay on the field for 3 turns". You just explain how and when it leaves. 5: You need a specific timing during the turn so it can leave the field by its effect. You also need a specific timing for it to come back. Example: "During your 3rd End Phase after this card is Summoned: Send it to the Graveyard. During your 3rd Standby Phase after this card was sent to the Graveyard by this effect: Special Summon it." [color=#800000]6: The first letter of every word should not be capitalized.[/color] [color=#800000]7: Cards should not be attached as thumbnails, and should not be posted twice.[/color] [color=#800000]8: You should crop images into squares before using them. Otherwise you get squished pictures like the one above.[/color] [color=#800000]9: In terms of style, there should be a space before and after the - in the name.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaia Of Destruction Posted July 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Thanks Bro. I Just Started You Should Mentor Me Sometimes Or Something Your Great!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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