masterdeckmaker113 Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 The following cards are from the Raditz part of the show that's why you may think some are under powered. [img]http://i.imgur.com/4WJJI.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zP9LP.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/musi3.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zpZOo.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/nVCo9.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/3OSqK.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/NYWP5.jpg[/img] Lore: Choose one of the following: *Inflict 500 points of damage to your opponents life points *Destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field *This card is treated as a continuous spell. This card can stay of the field for max of 5 turns. On the turn you activate this effect you increase the damage dealt to your opponent (starting at 500) x100 for each turn this card was on the field. [img]http://i.imgur.com/RGfDJ.jpg[/img] Lore: This card must stay face up on the field for 3 turns before activation. On the stand-by phase of the third turn this card is face up on the field choose on of the following: *Destroy 1 monster on the field. *Inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's life points. After you use one of the listed effects this card is destroyed and sent to the grave yard. [img]http://i.imgur.com/C7AkE.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/KPtaF.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay half of your life points to activate this card. This card can only be used once per duel. This cards activation cannot be negated. Choose one of the following effects: *Destroy all monsters your opponent controls. *Destroy all spells/traps your oppnent contols. *Special summon one monster from your graveyard or removed from play pile. *Add one card from your deck or graveyard to your hand *Inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent's life points *Increase your life points by 1500 *Increase one monsters ATK and DEF by 1000 After activation this card is destroyed and removed from play. [img]http://i.imgur.com/xaTvN.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ZTXov.jpg[/img] (Yes I know the background is blank but it's the only pic I could find) [img]http://i.imgur.com/6ohLs.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/HQMh3.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/DMnOo.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/K0eab.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/3GzGQ.jpg[/img] That's from the Raditz saga, tell me if I missed any. Until I make the Nappa/Vegeta saga, farewell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BraveStone1000 Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 If you make cards, try to make more monsters with a effect, that's more interesting to watch and it makes the game more fun. The pictures you used are not bad, but try not to use pictures with a blank background, that's boring. So if it's possible to find better pictures for your first 2 cards, change it. The cards are not bad, but there are some thing you should change, I'll give it a 5.5/10 for now. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterdeckmaker113 Posted July 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 [quote name='BraveStone1000' timestamp='1343650331' post='5992659'] If you make cards, try to make more monsters with a effect, that's more interesting to watch and it makes the game more fun. The pictures you used are not bad, but try not to use pictures with a blank background, that's boring. So if it's possible to find better pictures for your first 2 cards, change it. The cards are not bad, but there are some thing you should change, I'll give it a 5.5/10 for now. Keep it up! [/quote] I took your adivise with the picture changes and they look alot better now. New update! 4 new cards! + 2 new pictures for "Goku" and "Gohan"! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BraveStone1000 Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 [quote name='masterdeckmaker113' timestamp='1343677294' post='5992913'] I took your adivise with the picture changes and they look alot better now. New update! 4 new cards! + 2 new pictures for "Goku" and "Gohan"! [/quote]Good job, they look better now. And 'Ancient Eternal Dragon Shenron' is overpowerd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterdeckmaker113 Posted August 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 [quote name='BraveStone1000' timestamp='1343725675' post='5993457'] Good job, they look better now. And 'Ancient Eternal Dragon Shenron' is overpowerd. [/quote] Not really, you can only use one of the effects, then you can't use the card in the rest of the duel. Plus if my Shenron card is overpowered then Porunga will be super overpowered because he grants 3 wishes XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MK-ultra Posted August 1, 2012 Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 shenron and dragon balls are broke both needs cost and a HIGH cost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BraveStone1000 Posted August 1, 2012 Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 [quote name='masterdeckmaker113' timestamp='1343790504' post='5994087'] Not really, you can only use one of the effects, then you can't use the card in the rest of the duel. Plus if my Shenron card is overpowered then Porunga will be super overpowered because he grants 3 wishes XD [/quote]I just try to help, because the card can destroy all your opponent's monsters or spells/traps it needs a cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterdeckmaker113 Posted August 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2012 SUPER UBER MEGA UPDATE TIME!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nghtwing Posted August 5, 2012 Report Share Posted August 5, 2012 So, It's a pleasure to help new members! Ya know , try to use REAL backgrounds, I mean, those with only one collor aren't Good... and look for large pictures so they won't look like blurred... About the grammar... You should take a look on the "Grammar Threads" on the [b]Questions & Help[/b] Section ... They were a REAL help to me But by now... The words "summon" (and anyone related to it such as "Special Summon" "Fusion Summon" etc.) are in Caps ;D and Graveyard is written with Caps and together... Also, it's Removed From Play Zone The effects are good, the cards are UP'd by their level ... I mean, 1750 ATK for an Level 5 monster isn't fair... Since there is already Vanillas of Level 4 with 2000 ATK... isn't worth to Summon those cards you made :/ [hr] The bold part was corrected... Also, the link to the thread is below [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FatherOfGoku Posted August 6, 2012 Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 Pretty cool! This is inspiring me to make my own set! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterdeckmaker113 Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 [quote name='Nghtwing' timestamp='1344206596' post='5998278'] So, It's a pleasure to help new members! Ya know , try to use REAL backgrounds, I mean, those with only one collor aren't Good... and look for large pictures so they won't look like blurred... About the grammar... You should take a look on the "Grammar Threads" on the [b]Questions & Help[/b] Section ... They were a REAL help to me But by now... The words "summon" (and anyone related to it such as "Special Summon" "Fusion Summon" etc.) are in Caps ;D and Graveyard is written with Caps and together... Also, it's Removed From Play Zone The effects are good, the cards are UP'd by their level ... I mean, 1750 ATK for an Level 5 monster isn't fair... Since there is already Vanillas of Level 4 with 2000 ATK... isn't worth to Summon those cards you made :/ [hr] The bold part was corrected... Also, the link to the thread is below [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/"]http://forum.yugiohc...ntation-thread/[/url] [/quote] Thank you for your criticism and help, about the pictures, it's really hard to find good pictures that the site let's my use (I usually spend like 30 minutes looking for good pics and only find ones with 1 color background), also about the levels look at the first Yu-Gi-Oh! cards so many of them had level 5-6 but their ATK and DEF were only around 1500-1800, but I get what your saying about it, but I really made that card to be summoned from the effect Goku, but I guess I'll up their ATK a little I just didn't want them to be too strong, also thank you for the grammar thread I'll probably be using that often. [quote name='FatherOfGoku' timestamp='1344276077' post='5998887'] Pretty cool! This is inspiring me to make my own set! [/quote] Thanks for the compliment I always love it when I help someone especially when I inspire people. Make sure you give me the link to your set if you make it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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