Deltadave69 Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/l8WcU.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antist0opid Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 Because of its effect, it shouldnt be continuous. Effect should read: This card can only be activated when a monster you control is destroyed by battle. Until the End Phase of this turn, you opponent must tribute a moster they control to declare an attack. The card wouldn't get much use because your opponent can just decide not to attack or warning/judgment it. People arent stupid enough to waste their monsters like that. Card is better with other cards like Battle Mania, or other cards that force an attack. Good card against Karakuri's. Also the card should have some sort of cost. For example paying life points or discarding a number of cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deltadave69 Posted July 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 Thank you i shall edit it nowis this better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KumoriShadow Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 It seems a bit overpowered, still. You should probably pay some Life Points (maybe 1000-2000 or something) as well. Also, I can see some OCG mistakes: 1: 'destroyed in combat'. As cool as that sounds, the proper term is 'destroyed in battle'. 2. When this card is activated[b], [/b]your opponent must [b]tribute [/b] 3. Also, you refer to the opponent as male by saying 'his side of the field'. Yu-Gi-Oh players can be female too (I'm female and I play), so to keep it genderless, just say 'their side of the field'. 4. Capitalize the 'C' in 'Circle'. Otherwise, I like the effect of this card and it could be a real game changer if you're doing badly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loyalist Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 Correct me if I'm wrong but I thought it was "Destroyed [b][i]by[/i][/b] battle" or "Destroyed[b][i] as a result of[/i][/b] battle" not that it really matters. (I sound like a perfectionist xD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KumoriShadow Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 Oh wait, it is. You're right, Loyalist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deltadave69 Posted August 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 ok thanks guys i really need to learn as much as i can to become as good as you three Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahmed esam mido Posted August 1, 2012 Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 hi .friends .pls tell me how to save cards whice we make in any yugi games and put it on the field ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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