EMPrunner Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 Hi guys im new here and this is my first archetype . Hope you like it [img]http://i.imgur.com/JVStF.jpg[/img] [quote]When this card is summoned you can banish one "dark Legion" monster from your deck. Up to twice per turn if you control less monsters than your opponent you can summon one banished "Dark Legion" monster to your side of the field[/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/jn4aw.jpg[/img] [quote]When This card is synchro summoned you can banish any number of monsters you control to banish the same number of monsters your opponent control. Once per turn you can shuffle one of your banished "Dark Legion" monsters to the deck and if you do this card gain 400 atk[/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/j70gI.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/pQ0A7.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/NPDhL.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zn0sP.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/VMvjw.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/mir3b.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/7EpgT.jpg[/img] [quote]You can special summon this card from your hand by returning 2 of your banished "Dark Legion" monsters to your graveyard . Once per turn you can banish this card you control to destroy one card your opponent control and if u do special summon this banished card to your side of the field at the end of your opponent next end phase.[/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/GiHQb.jpg[/img] [quote]You can special summon this card from your hand by banishing one "Dark Legion" monster on your side of the field. This card gain effect dependent of how many of your monsters are banished : - 3 or less - Once per turn you can discard one card to special summon one "Dark Legion" monster from your graveyard to your side of the field -4 or more - this card gain 600 atk. at the end of the battle phase if this card attack or was attacked you can change it to defense position to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the half of this monster attack.[/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/n2pqQ.jpg[/img] [quote]each time a "Dark Legion" monster is banished place one Legion counter on this card . Once per turn you can remove any number of Legion counters from this card to special summon one banished "Dark Legion" monster to your side of the field with level equal or less to number of Legion counters you removed from this card[/quote] More coming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 There are quite a few OCG errors, such as Capital letters and what not. I wont fix every effect but I can try to fix the first. [color=#9BA2A9][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]When this card is summoned you can banish one "dark Legion" monster from your deck.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#9BA2A9][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Up to twice per turn if you control less monsters than your opponent you can summon one banished "Dark Legion" monster to your side of the field[/size][/font][/color] [b][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Fix: When this card is Normal Summoned, banish one "Dark Legion" monster from your deck. If you have less monster on the field than your opponent, you can summon one "Dark Legion" monster to the field.[/size][/font][/b] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Correct me if I am wrong experts.[/size][/font] [font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][size=3]Instead of having "banished" simply make it "move to grave" or something like that. Defeats the object of them being "Banished". In my view, this card looks OP, but I am known to be wrong sometimes. However, I like the archetype concept. Keep at it bro![/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EMPrunner Posted July 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 General is a synchro so he cant be normal summoned And in TCG term "banish" means remove form play i dont know how it is called in OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 I'm old school and don't quite understand the whole synchro stuff, frankly I don't want too. And to you comment, if a card has been "removed" from play, surly you cannot bring it back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EMPrunner Posted July 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 well in the "new" yu-gi-oh some decks do it all the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 Like I said i'm quite old school so I wouldn't know. However, the rest of what I said still applies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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