ExLithium Posted August 1, 2012 Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 Hi YCM Community, long time card maker, first time poster. But since this isn't an introduction thread, let's go on with it. This is "Psychia", my first archetype (that I'm releasing). I'd like some constructive criticism. Also, if I've missed something on the grammar, please correct me as I finally understood the new problem-solving card text. Actually I'm finding errors in some cards (there is no "Psychia Bride Gallade") so I'm going to fix the lores here and do the fixes on the cards tommorow (I'll try to update the set tommorow). [spoiler=Gates of Psychia] [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Effect Monsters] [spoiler=Psychia Bride Gardevoir] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaBrideGardevoir.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "Cannot be Set. When this card is Normal Summoned: Change it to Defense Position. If this card is used as an Xyz Material with "Psychia Groom Gallade"; this card can be used as two Xyz Materials."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia Dancer Kirlia] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaDancerKirlia.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "Once per turn during your Main Phase 1 while this card is Level 4: You can target a "Psychic Aura of Division" from your Deck; add the target to your hand. If this 1 monster is used as a tribute for the Normal Summon of a "Psychia Groom Gallade" or a "Psychia Bride Gardevoir"; this card can be used as the whole tribute."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia Defender Reuniclus] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaDefenderReuniclus.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "During your opponent's Battle Phase, while this card is banished: You can end your opponent's Battle Phase. Each player can only activate the effect of "Psychia Defender Reuniclus" twice per Duel."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia Dreamer Musharna] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaDreamerMusharna.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by the effect of "Psychian Aura of Dreams" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn during your opponent's Battle Phase: You can tribute one Level 4 or lower "Psychia" monster you control; this card gains DEF equal to that monster's ATK."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia Floater Munna] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaFloaterMunna.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "When this card is flipped face-up: you can target 1 card on your hand or Graveyard; banish that target."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia God Mew] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaGodMew.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by banishing 3 "Psychia" monsters from your Graveyard and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn: You can target one card you control and one card your opponent controls; banish both targets."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia Groom Gallade] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaGroomGallade.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "Cannot be Set. While you control a face-up "Psychia Bride Gardevoir": This card gains 400 ATK. If this card is used as an Xyz Material with "Psychia Bride Gardevoir"; this card can be used as two Xyz Materials. "[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia Kid Ralts] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaKidRalts.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "Once per turn during your Main Phase: you can reveal 1 Level 5 or higher monster from your hand; the targeted monster loses 1 Level."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia Sorcerer Alakazam] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaSorcererAlakazam.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "If this card is banished by the effect of a "Psychia" card: Special Summon it. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect: This card cannot attack and its Level becomes 4."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia Sorcereress Gothitelle] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaSorceressGothitelle.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "You can Normal Summon this card without Tributing, but its Level is halved and it cannot attack directly. If this card is Normal Summoned by its own effect: When this card attacks; target one banished card on your side of the field and send it to your hand."[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Xyz Monsters] [spoiler=Psychia Life Eraser Mewtwo] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaLifeEraserMewtwo.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "3 Level 8 "Psychia" monsters Once per turn during your opponent's Battle Phase: you can detach 3 Xyz Materials from this card; destroy all cards your opponent controls. While this card has no Xyz Materials: destroy it."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Psychia V-Hero Victini] [img]http://i1210.photobucket.com/albums/cc403/ExLithium/Psychia/PsychiaV-HeroVictini.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] "2 Level 4 "Psychia" monsters Once per turn, during your Main Phase: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; banish 1 card on the field, the controller of the banished card gains Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. Once per turn during each of your Standby Phases, while this card has no Xyz Materials: target 1 monster you control; destroy it."[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler] I'll post the Spells tommorow, and yes, banishing support in Spells. And if anyone's interested: GAOP = Gates of Psychia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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