ＯＳＩＲＩＳ Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 So this is my first Archetype, SwordTECH! [spoiler=SwordTECH Monsters.] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Th7FL.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Special Summoned, draw 2 cards, if 1 of those card's name is "SwordTECH - Silver Sergeant", remove it from play, then on your second Main Phase after this card's effect activation (Main Phase 2 does not apply), Special Summon it.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/mkJhq.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "SwordTECH - Golden Commando", give this card 500 ATK points during your Battle Phase only.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/SxROV.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When your opponent declares an attack on another "SwordTECH" monster you control, destroy this card instead (Battle Damage is not applied).[/spoiler] More will be coming soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fooly000 Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 hmmmm i really like the idea but the effects could use some work. I was thinking you can make it a mill/equipment deck and have it focus on using equips as a way for them to gain there mill effects. Golden Genral effect would be really hard to pull off so i would say you should change the effect to any SwordTECH instead of silver sergant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randomflyingobjects Posted August 4, 2012 Report Share Posted August 4, 2012 It's hard to see where this set is going, so I'm guessing it's based off of Summoning each other, along with a whole lot of luck. There should be specific effects that base on the Machines, and others that base on the Warriors. I'd say the warriors should take the lead, and like the post above stated, they seem like an archetype that should equip. In this case, the Machines equip to the Warriors, though the machines can stand alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fooly000 Posted August 4, 2012 Report Share Posted August 4, 2012 @randomflyingobjects can you review my cards please i need some help [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/287413-judgement-of-a-dark-night/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/287413-judgement-of-a-dark-night/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ambrogirmint705 Posted August 4, 2012 Report Share Posted August 4, 2012 I find some TCG errors in the lore, but overall these cards looks great. Here I've fixed some the lore of your cards, if you don't mind.(in Bold) SwordTECH Golden General When this card is Special Summoned, draw 2 cards.[b] If 1 of the card(s) drawn is "SwordTECH" monsters, banish it from play. On your 2nd turn after this card's effect resolved, Special Summon the card banished by this effect.[/b] SwordTECH Silver Sergeant If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "SwordTECH - Golden Commando", this card[b] gains 500 ATK[/b] points during your Battle Phase only. * A little TCG error fixed SwordTECH Bronze Battler This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When your opponent declares an attack on another "SwordTECH" monster you control, destroy this card instead (Battle Damage is not applied). * This card's effect is already quite balanced, so I let it be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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