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Hydra Iron Man

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Oh god where to start.
Name: Caught in Purgatory Between Barely Decent and WTF is this?
Picture: Terrible--I'm sorry, not just the 'flatness' but--well, everything!
Stats: Decent. Nothing OP'd about them.
Effect: Way too OP'd and defiantly contains Broken text.
Overall: Not so good man :/ I recommend trashing the whole thing and starting from scratch. Focus on create a [i]Good[/i] Card, not a card that unlevels the playing field. Draw this card at the start of a duel and you can just trash your opponent with them having little/no chance to defend themselves.

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Umm... the only ways i can even start to think about improving this are as follows:
Change the first effect to only when they draw from an EFFECT, not just draw. You should not be able to nail a person for drawing in there draw phase.

Then... you should make it discard the card they drew. Not there entire hand, so its a drop of duplicate in hand trap form.

Finally, you should only draw one card at maximum. As it stands, and exodia deck runs 3 of this... yeah. That sums it up in 6 words i think.

It's not the greatest idea in history, and as it stands is horrifyingly overpowered, but it can be improved. I think. my idea is probably still awful, but its an attmpet at least.

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No, no, no! Here's what this cards effect [i][b]should[/b][/i] be.
[size=3][spoiler=Original Effect Incoming!][/size][i][size=4]You can discard this card when you draw a card(s) outside of your Draw Phase: Your opponent draws the same amount of cards you drew; send your hand to the Graveyard, then draw until you have the same amount of cards in your hand as your opponent.[/size][/i][/spoiler]

See, that would be a fun and original effect. Much more circumstantial. And more fitting towards the name. [size=1]OCG's probably off though.[/size]

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